AntsFood
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AntsFood2dCommentedI open my heavy eyelids. I'm lying on my belly in the soft grass again. On my right I can see the wooden sign. "Barrier" doesn't pique my curiosity anymore. At this point I don't want to do anything at all with it. Just looking in that direction makes me want to throw up. As I manage to stand up, I notice that my rags are dripping. I already threw up. I groan as I get annoyed. My only piece of clothing is now wet, cold and reeks. Come to think of it, I've never taken a notice of my clothing before. I'm wearing a short sleeved piece of clothing made out of rags. It almost completely covers my body as it goes down to my dirty leather shoes.- AntsFood2dReplied to AntsFoodI open my heavy eyelids. I'm lying on my belly in the soft grass again. On my right I can see the wooden sign. "Barrier" doesn't pique my curiosity anymore. At this point I don't want to do anything at all with it. Just looking in that direction makes me want to throw up. As I manage to stand up, I notice that my rags are dripping. I already threw up. I groan as I get annoyed. My only piece of clothing is now wet, cold and reeks. Come to think of it, I've never taken a notice of my clothing before. I'm wearing a short sleeved piece of clothing made out of rags. It almost completely covers my body as it goes down to my dirty leather shoes.
- AntsFood5dCommentedI say aloud once again, with my voice echoing through my head. Why am I here in the first place? What is my purpose here? I start looking around when I suddenly catch a glimpse of my silhoutte in the river. I start walking closer with my face getting more clear with every step. Finally I stand on the river's edge and see a young face of a man, with chestnut-colored hair and soulless blue eyes. He seems tired. Or is it I?
- AntsFood5dCommentedLooking down I notice a kneeling old lady with her helpless grey eyes staring into mine, as if I were her last hope. Her grey eyes beautifully blend with her silver-colored hair. She seems to be in a casual clothes.
- AntsFood5dCommentedOnly a little distance is separating me from the three individuals now. All three of them seem to be looking at this new outsider. At my eye level I can see two young men with no differences between their faces. The only significant difference between them is their hair color. The right one has light, hay-like hair while the one on the left has hair as dark as a charcoal. They both are wearing some kind of violet uniform with long capes around them. It almost looks as if they are from a cult.
- AntsFood5dCommentedOnly a little distance is separating me from the three individuals now. All three of them seem to be looking at this new outsider. At my eye level I can see two young men with no differences between their faces. The only significant difference between them is their hair color. The right one has light, hay-like hair while the one on the left has hair as dark as a charcoal. They both are wearing some kind of violet uniform with long capes around them. It almost looks as if they are from a cult.
- AntsFood5dReplied to Rickson_Landor
Thank You so much! This comment really means a lot to me. I will try to fix the spelling mistakes. I’m sorry, but they might occur as English isn’t my native language. So thanks for the feedback once again and stay tuned for the new chapter ( which will be released soon )!
Ch 1 The Barrier