Maddy_0112

story is outrageously trash... MC is a crybaby, naive, Dumb and trash. The whole story is a sob story.

great story.... just include bit R18 chapters.

till around 25 chapters MC is good but after that he is just simp and trash like every chinese fanfic young master. he tries to pretend to be cautious but he fails every time. SIMP

Great book .. and good MC till now. just update frequency is not good. I think you should keep MC's nature ruthless and cunning and for God sake do not make him simp, naive and dumb

do not drop this.. it's quite good. I like game development fanfiction.

Han Zhu is trash. he always thinks of being low key and thinks of the mindset of han li. but he himself is showing off .. if he stayed silent he wouldn't have to leave 12×dense spiritual place for his foolishness

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great work ... do not drop it and do not make MC Dumb as the story proceeds.

Increase speed of updates of chapters. I would like to give you free advice that you should focus on this fanfic more than others. your this series is best .