It's cool

Yeah, ideally he's ambushed by the enemy and should die along with his master Windu and nebula, because of the reckless idiot mc, you can safely throw it, I hoped he wouldn't be such an idiot, but come on, it's not the first time

Oh my God, the naive little idiot is now planning to help every damsel in distress

If he's going to be like this throughout history, it's fucked up.,

As in many fanfiction, you make this mistake. Why are you making greengrass too smart and skillful for her age, this is nonsense, she's just an 11-year-old child, why suddenly she already knows the 3rd year material, why is this character enhancement?

Seriously? Why is this chapter needed?

I hope the Dursleys and Dumbledore die a horrible death.

How does the author stretch the chapters, this chapter can fit into one sentence

Are these chapters related at all?

There are 4 chapters in 3 months, the story is interesting, but the output of the chapters is just terrible, I'm afraid I'll just forget everything I've read by the time you release a new chapter and there will be no point in reading

With a 100 percent probability, he will chase them and the author will play out an unnecessary drama,

And why? Garbage

So he's useless?

Simp Simp Simp Simp Simp

Simp simp simp

Only an idiot doesn't kill his enemies, no wonder his world is gone

So he's no better than his sisters? Except for the emptiness. So disappointing

In principle, her participation in the ritual really spoiled this story for many, judging by the comments

I don't like the fact that Daphne gets everything for free

If Daphne is constantly going to follow the mc, then it's worth giving up reading