Great story so far. The characters are very interesting and unique. Love how they interact with each other. The world building is very easy to understand, which I like. There aren't any confusing plot lines either.

I think this story has a well developed foundation that can easily be built upon. The characters are great and I love Phoenix. He is my favorite character so far.

The story was well executed and planned out. The theme runs very nicely with the story. I do love how it was all part of Clover's imagination. That was a real curve ball that you threw at us, the readers.