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Yeah but he’s corrupted by the stone so he decided to eliminate all life since that would mean no life would be put to harm anymore
I think you meant Isagi
Make her waifu
Author should’ve put this in the novel category not the fanfic
Breh .-.
Breh .-.
Literally stripping him of his uniqueness
I thought last chapters were fine except maybe the sudden call out of the “mysterious” female. the sudden energy spike would’ve been more natural and enough reason for him to go there then things can go from there
I’m sure he would’ve been fine lol
Bruh, this makes no sense at least make it understandable
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Maybe it’s different, Saitama had limitless physical capabilities but MC is soul and has spiritual power it could lean towards that instead of physical power
Could you use English for haki, it’s confusing seeing those names when people are used to English version
Hitsugaya is over a hundred but looks like a kid
I think you should keep a dialogue together not spaced.
The last dialogue could’ve been an explanation for her fanaticism, it doesn’t need to be in the conversation
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