ADHA_Storys

Oh, I love this. It has a lot of potential and it is a fun read. A little slow but I understand why. Please Author continue with this fanfic. but also take care of yourself k.

Love this fanfic. It features great themes, including the judge, the jury, and the executioner. please author don't drop this. p.s. author please also take care of yourself.

has a lot of potential. looking forward to more chapters. p.s. Author please take care of yourself. and please continue.

this story could be very interesting if developed properly hopefully the author can do it. p.s. author please take care of yourself.

this has a good amount of potential. Hopefully the author will use that potential. p.s. author take care of yourself ok.

this is a amazing fanfic, I can already tell I'm going to love reading this. so author please take care of yourself.

pretty good so far. make sure you get rest Author and pace yourself so you don't suffer burnout. the story itself has a lot of potential. please continue writing.

I would have Rias accept the consequences of the battle but because she still has a territory to manage. Use that to have Riser be a part of the college division but keep the MC as a teacher allowing the MC to still protect Rias and allow for them to bond more strengthening their relationship. Then, when Kokabiel arrives have him kill Riser making the peace conference more tense because the Underworld has lost a person who can supply phoenix tears. then have Azazel face consequences by having him teacher the Gremory peerage and sona peerage make them stronger allowing for better fights.

I would have Rias accept the consequences, because she has a territory to manage she has to do that so Riser can go with her but in the college division. The MC can still be the teacher and because he's there Riser will not do anything to Rias because the MC will tell Sirzechs about it. then when Kokabiel show up, have battle go on for a bit then have Kokabiel kill Riser. the peace conference will have more tension because the Underworld has lost a person who can make Phoenix tears. you use that to make Azazel have to work with the Gremory peerage earlier than originally planned making them strong and allowing for better fights.

So this is not so true. even though he went through emotional evolution during the training arc it doesn't mean he should help her. because if you write something like this the reader expects you to follow through. if you don't then anything you write that could have consequences loses it weight.