This really is annoying ...

*unnecessary

I Understand literary expression and all but it still...using the name of an important figure to a widespread religion such as Christianity. it is disrespectful and unmindful of your readers. And borderline disrespectful

bro, well done with this story I have been having fun with it. But I must point out that it could be better also I'd like to offer to become your editor. What do you say ?

Are you for real?...What do you call a rinne-sharingan user loosing his important eye (that houses over half of his powers) to a chunin? or the death of a jinchuriki's tailed beast? keeping in mind the great shift from ninjutsu to mainstream taijutsu relegating those with ninjutsu talent to close to useless

this should be "didn't" not aren't

Isn't ming already an emperor?

did this book switch authors? because the quality seems to have dropped significantly.

I'm going out of my way to review this work. please come with me on this journey. dm me with your thoughts and gifts. Thank you.

i understand your point but not all neutral countries were poor meaning not all third world countries are poor. just understand that

so, no harem?! or is there?please tell me

Just for you to note: The classification into first, second and third world countries is not a function of a countries wealth and development but a function of thier political alliances. Third world countries are countries that are neutral, you can read up on that. I'm saying this because I find it really annoying and depreciating for my country to be tagged poor, or as one where people wear rags, no water etc. My country just like any first or second world country has it's urban areas and rural areas, developed and slummy areas. So please be careful the way you use this term. while some 'third' world countries are poor that is not what marks them as third world countries.

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😊I smile, at how, stupid people can be.

Author, this seems like a very good premise for a novel, the system and the writing quality is top notch. But there is something keeping me from reading on, and that's the skirmish with is mother. I am someone who doesn't really care about those the mc choose to be with but it doesn't make sense. If you didn't have plans for the mom why include that little skirmish, it is very unnecessary, like inko doesn't seem like the kind that will just want to use mc to satisfy her lust: so her doing all that must mean she had developed feelings and even with that......Ahhh. I'm sorry, you're doing such a good job but I can't move on without knowing the nature of the mc and his mum's relationship. Can you make it clear, pretty please 🥺

And you feel like this is normal, I hate when people treat sex like a plaything. SEX IS SACRED!!

what d'ya mean no harem, stop treating harem like it's a plague and admonish the writers who desecrate it

my thoughts exactly, what sacred gear, rubbish

ahh and here I am complaining that I can't find a good harem novel. This writers treat a harem like it's some beauty shop where women are stored. Most likely written by a bunch of sex starved d*ck brained idiots.

My guy, I'm a fair skinned black african and I can tell you for sure that guy's blush because I have experienced it, it happens a lot and for a number of reasons. I used to have a colleague who would blush bright when he is angry.