I love the premise of this story and the writing style. The author is doing an amazing job with expressing both emotional and physical going-ons .Five star to take the drive far!

Wanted to make a joke about Taiwan, but didn't ...?

Great story, I feel like the story has great promise for success. Keep it up Author. .

Thanks, as for editing, I'd kill for an editor to drop from the sky, but what can you do when everyone else is living their own life. POV; you're broke

The novel is a work in progress. The story is very straight forward and attracts readers easily. The character Design is not generic like others you may find on this site. The gradual errors can easily be shrugged of because the story is worth it! It's a original idea, Keep it up author five stars from me 😊

I agree

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I felt like i might have xome across as self absorbed in the earlier comment so i decided to give it an actual read(up to 8.). It isn't my cup of tea. But it doesnt detract from the book. Its a great action book. Anyone who reads shounen should give it a read. I will just stick to comedy dramas? Sit-coms? Whatever as long as i'm laughing

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Thank you very much, love your book too (•‿•)

Great novel, great characters. Great story. The writing quality is consistent and I like the way the story flows. Lol, I sound like a bot Anyways, keep it up~

Toshiba? Like the computer?

Excellent book, it's rising star material. The writer is very good, updates are stable and everything else is top notch. I recommend this book to those who like mystery. 5 stars

It's a great novel so far, the writer has good grasp on English Language and use of grammar👍 Updating stability 3for3👍 Plot👍 Great potential World building: hoping she leaves the village soon?👍 Character👍 Very original FL, going back to the roots of what a FL can be that isn't defined by relatives bullying her or a female friend netori-ing her. A FL is supposed to Lead!. Altogether it's a great novel, five stars to the author, keep it up

I love this book! I mean, it's a great book, it's no TMC but there's something about the style of writing that pulls you in, deeper and deeper. I'm already psyched for the way the drama could develop NGL, plus when you start including mafias you know there's gonna be action. The writing quality is consistent, the updates are okay too(does she really have a day job?) I already talked about how good the story is and the characters are very emotive, just enough emotion that you don't drown in plot on the first chapter. The book is just starting but I hope to see more. Kudos to the author for writing this great book

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Great writing quality! You can easily tell what the writer is trying to convey without hassle. Stability of updates? could be better, but everyone has their own pace Story Development; Full Immersion! You're in it from the first chapter, so it's much better than some others I won't mention. Giving credit where it's due... Character design is flawless. World background is unique. Just a bit slow on the release.