James_Gaperinco
I write when I’m bored. Writing a book because I read one and I was playing dark souls
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Hope you enjoy this!
I swear I went though all these chapters to fix the ages. Thanks for spotting that, I’ll fix it!
Thanks, I’l re-check those chapters and hopefully they’ll update properly with the right information!
Yeah, some of the chapters still haven’t upd for some some odd reason. Just let me know if you find another chapter with the same issue.
Haha, my bad. Some of these chapters are still the older ones
Four, time skip from being born.
Hey All, Author here. I would like to give a review on this as it’d just give more attention to it. But, I’d like to point out some things I enjoy and don’t enjoy about my own writing. 1. This is my own distaste, but I hate how much I have to rely on other books or my inspirations to progress things to happen. Mushoku Tensei is a good example. 2. The world building in this is a priority, as it makes the world feel alive and I feel like I’ve been doing a good constant work on that. This world is a breathing one that doesn’t always revolve around the MC, and I try to make it seem possible. 3. When it comes to the plot itself, I feel like it’s a jumbled mess that I only I can figure out? Maybe that’s just me, but I feel I always need to go back to older chapters to add or remove something to make it all more comprehensible. 4. Action scenes in this novel are my favorite things to write in this and I feel like they are descriptive enough and creative enough! 5. Humor in this book is just my own humor that I use in real life, using inspirations from KonoSuba and other things. There’s nothing much I can say about this since I do enjoy my own humor(Hit the yoinky Sploinky!) Hopefully, you enjoy reading this! I always strive for feedback and learning to be a better writer!
Still working on re-editing old chapters
Sorry, I keep forgetting to update the auxiliary chapters! I’ll have those updated most likely by next week!
Now that you’ve said this, that fact kinda flew over my head when writing that part. But you got me there. Lol