this was like any other dxd fan fic the mc is op an has something to do with rias the idea behind it wasn't bad but it was poorly executed I really don't see the point of the mc being so edgy and emotionless when is life wasn't that bad he has no real attachment to anyone in the world what's the point in being emotionless when you get the chance at a new life and it would've been so much better to watch mc grow with each battle to feel the fear of death to lose something and realized he's not in a video game an everyone around him are not npc, it would have been so much better to see a mc that progress throughout the story gaining strength and defeating strong foes not an op mc without and development what so ever the story feels lackluster and it's like reading a flashback of the mc life in my opinion this is not a good fan fic if your expecting development but if your just looking for and op edge lord then go for it.

stealing others work it's quite shameless and disgusting, someone put in the work yet you want to reap the reward. It's people like you that makes the world so rotten.

I guess your right 😅

No Character Development 😑

agreed it's quite cliche I've seen too many of these fic and the mc is way to op it's just not realistic for dxd I mean come on beating a major god has Shiva who has lived for who knows how long growing is strength and have way more fighting experience at the age of 13, there's just literally no way that should happen the mc has the character development he didn't struggle to reach were he's at it basically takes the fun out of it. Just another OP mc that you fine in any other trash fic about dxd.

heh not bad but not that good either the story really isn't made from much research most of it is garbage and the way the character acts is quit stupid in my opinion.