Yo author in 1st, 3rd and 5th para there's some typo erroe fix this please and next time write it better am not wasting my time by giving you power stone for this poor quakity

Lol somehow i feel like i am watching some educational things 🤣🤣

So far the story is good as of now there is only 6 chapters and story has already progressed so I think this may be a short story with like 50-60 chapters well these things apart eagerly waiting for the mew chapter release🙂 Also the main character looks a bit realistic he does not do things irrationally

Not that great though I, agree that the story is interesting, but it's not that engaging and people like to see r18 novels more than these type of novels lol maybe the author should try writing adult book😂😂

Ohh it's somewhat interesting I look forward to the updates the story seems amusing.

Good but the chapter was too short.