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Reykskjar2yrReplied to ChouxPastryHeartimmaterial strength is a kind of strength that doesn't specifically apply to certain parts of the body. you know when you work out for a bit, then try and do something, but it hurts too much, so you come back to it later, but then you *can* do it? that is effectively immaterial strength working on your body.
Throbbing pain inundated Zhou Mingrui, allowing him to slowly accumulate immaterial strength until he was finally able to move his back and open his eyes. He finally broke free from his reverie.- Reykskjar2yrReplied to Arch_Angel200
this case is spelling, actually. grammar would be the way the words are ordered.
Famous last words. - Reykskjar2yrCommented
Oh yeah, it's all coming together.
We all ran toward the sound of the scream. When we turned a couple of corners, we found the source of the cry. A woman in blue armor was trying to fend off eight goblins with a sword, but she was surrounded. - Reykskjar2yrReplied to MICHAEL_RICH
.hurb
"My name is Gri'Xikickic, and my husband is Bireechxickic," Gri'Xikickic spoke before turning and leaving. - Reykskjar2yrCommented
Komrade!
FRIENDSHIP LEVEL 45/100 YOU ARE GOOD FRIENDS. - Reykskjar2yrCommented
*pierce
PEIRCE EVIL: People with evil intentions have black auras - Reykskjar2yrReplied to THICCC_Luigi
agreed
I pull my chair closer with a sign. Why can't Lavender be more like Miss Tilly? I guess if she weren't the way she was, then it just wouldn't be her. I put my hand out when I was sure I could reach for Lavender's hand as I moved my chair forwards. - Reykskjar2yrReplied to Reykskjar
*they're
Due to the RELATIONSHIP STATUS UPDATE, LAVENDER is now a part of your party. Increase your RELATIONSHIP STATUS to gain more benefits! - Reykskjar2yrCommented
that means their friends but without the benefits.
Due to the RELATIONSHIP STATUS UPDATE, LAVENDER is now a part of your party. Increase your RELATIONSHIP STATUS to gain more benefits! - Reykskjar2yrCommented
man is aging like he's getting blasted in the time wave by thanos
The force knocked me back a step, and I could feel her modest chest press into me, but I was fifteen now and could easily hold her weight. Lavender looked up at me, confused and embarrassed. I guess she felt them brush too, because her face heated, and she turned away. I set her down and then used PUSH to throw back some to close creatures. I pushed her body off mine and looked her over, making sure nothing was wrong, and I noticed the tips of her nipples pressing against her dress. - Reykskjar2yrCommented
*crotch
My AVATAR card popped up above her hand, and she began to examine it. Lavender even crawled across my legs to get closer to see. She almost pushed her hand into my crouch, but noticed at the last second and moved her hand, but then she slipped. I awkwardly tried to help Lavender with one arm pull her face from between my legs, but Miss Grace paid us no mind. Instead, she hummed at what she saw, and before finally pulling away. - Reykskjar2yrCommented
did he literally not grow from the body of a 7 year old to the body of a 12 year old?
I get out of the tub and dry myself off, thinking excitedly about my AVATAR and the cool new skills. Once it dried off, I put the clothes on that Tilly bought for me. I was pretty surprised to find black jeans and a white t-shirt that somehow fit me after my growth spurt. - Reykskjar2yrCommented
*pierce
PEIRCE EVIL: People with evil intentions have black auras and are vulnerable to the HERO's LIGHT BLADE Skill. - Reykskjar2yrCommented
the last parts' power is law. even *that* got bigger.
Wiping the water on my face away, I can still see my stat window open, but my eyes are drawn to my hand and the arm attached to it. My hand isn't huge, but it and my arm are bigger now. I slowly stood up, wobbling, and realized that I'm taller now. My legs are longer, and when I look between them, even that got bigger! - Reykskjar2yrCommented
is he the random citizen who *happens* to always be in the right place at the right time? is he gonna be SCP-008-J? I recommend looking it up. link posted in: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/scp-008-j
You have received a new CLASS and SKILLS. Please check your AVATAR for details. - Reykskjar2yrCommented
imagine this in like an excessively deep voice like when a girl tries to emulate a male voice.
"Take the sac off," growled Lavender through the wall of bubbles I had sunk behind. - Reykskjar2yrCommented
the 'how dont you stink' tho
"How don't you stink? Never mind, come on, Dave, let's head up, and I will show you to a room where you can put your," but Lavender paused there and then changed the course of the conversation. "Then, I'll show you to the bathroom. Then, while you're getting clean, Tilly, our maid, will get you some clean clothes." - Reykskjar2yrReplied to Pokemon_Master_0292
fifth rate noble tho.
"Aren't you just a Darling, but by the sounds, your stomach says you're starving! My name is Grace Huntington, and I am a Dutchess of the fifth noble level. I specialize as a Duelist, and I have a comfortable home with no husband. Would you like to come live with me, my little burlap sac boy?" - Reykskjar2yrPosted
Ok, Ima be straight with you bro. This was painful to read. The dialogue is rough, although clear. I mean to say that while the grammar is good, some of what they're saying makes no sense if you think about it from the way an actual conversation works and flows. Granted, I didn't read that far, but if you think about the dialogue in the conversations you're writing and it doesn't make sense to you, it probably will not make sense to readers. I don't say this at all as hate or anything, I say this in encouragement. Believe me, your work so far is not at all as bad as others I've seen, by far. Good job so far and good luck.
- Reykskjar2yrReplied to DaoistLadyKiller
it's gotta be that
"Thanks." He said.