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Oleanderr014dReplied to KnightmaresBye
He was proud of both of them, of course, the system had given him a little knowledge of his own power and Admon realised at that moment why he should not use it, so it became his duty to train Petunia, his first pupil and left arm, and Mery, his only servant and right arm.- Oleanderr014dReplied to Knightmares
At this point of the story he just do not know if he is strong or not. Yes he does know magic and cultivation, it is just the system is a holy being that has been created by the creators so in the perspective system lies that he is no strong since no one wants him to destroy the whole existence.
Immediately after Admon saw this, he came out from behind the tree and said aloud,"Please let her go." He did not know if he could defeat the beasts in front of him, after all, he did not have any information about how strong or how weak he was. - Oleanderr019dCommentedCh 1 Rats
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Hello, author here! First of all, I would like to thank everyone who reviewed my novel. The main structure of the novel will deal with a main character focused on revenge and survival. In this process, I will try to process in detail the main character who chases revenge with the excitement of living as a person with many resources and many possibilities in a civilisation that has been destroyed by zombies, mutations and extraordinary climate changes. If you are interested in mutation or zombie topics, please feel free to read the novel.
- Oleanderr026dReplied to kv_singh_1347
That is the kind of feeling i was trying to give, it all will connect. Please just give it some time.
"PLEASE HELP!!!" - Oleanderr026dReplied to kv_singh_1347
Not exactly, you do not need to worry. Just give it some time pleaae :)
On top of that, during this 100-year period, he made the huge garden of his house incredibly beautiful. He bought tree saplings, plant saplings and many similar things from the points he earned and did not neglect to plant them in the garden regularly. He also bought unknown animal eggs from the system market and these eggs were animals that could be eaten or used as pets. - Oleanderr026dReplied to kv_singh_1347
omg thank you so much for understanding what i wrote this great. i am so so happy!
"Then strike the final blow! I must at least be killed by someone honourable!" the demon shouted and with that a sword was thrust through his throat, the red-eyed being didn't care or wait, he was too tired to be cajoled. - Oleanderr027dCommentedCh 31 Journey
- Oleanderr029dReplied to Daoistm7Yh5H
No
Suddenly Vered looked up and quickly jumped up and wrapped his arms around Olva's waist. Even if Olva was suddenly surprised, he still thought that it was better than being killed for the question he asked, so he was now ready to accept everything. - Oleanderr01mthReplied to Daoistm7Yh5H
Ok this time you are not very wrong, almost all of the things you wrote there are the things i actually plan. Good job.
"Fire is different from other elements. The flames must be perfect, only the one who has the fire and aligns the flames is the most perfect. It must be neither as solid as earth, nor as free as air, nor as pure as water, nor as deadly as blood, nor as fierce as lightning, nor as sacred as light, nor as dark as darkness. Fire and its accompanying flames must be perfect." As Admon explained, Petunia realised that her development was progressing in a perfect dimension. The fact that every single being in the garden was watching her was really embarrassing, but as the high cultivation qi from Admon's teachings entered her body, her cultivation was really soaring. - Oleanderr01mthReplied to Daoistm7Yh5H
Like i told you it is MY NOVEL so i am writing it as i want to. Maybe stop comparing it to the others since i basically don't mind any of them while writing other then "Cultivation Bigshot".
"Sir, I travelled to the demon beast villages near the demon forest to see if the shamans might know of a cure for this disease. They promised to investigate if they did because of your help to them earlier. Then I came across a hidden tribe, they told me about one of your ancestors who had helped them, and they told me about an immortal who lived in the centre of the forest." When the man who had told the story had finished, he suddenly gasped and fell to the ground, he had travelled onwards and back to the empire without stopping, he was even beginning to feel dizzy from exhaustion. Even for a cultivator of his level, travelling over 15,000 kilometres in a month had been difficult. - Oleanderr01mthReplied to Daoistm7Yh5H
Oh i see but you must remember, diffrent novels will have diffrent topics even tho they are similar at some certain point.
"MY KING, IS HERE!?" one of them shouted loudly as the group entered and he, like the whole group, could not believe his eyes. From the moment they stepped inside, their spiritual energy increased. Each of them noticed the sculptures, carvings, paintings, calligraphy, and to top it all off, the smell of good food wafting through their noses. Each of these artistic things literally possessed the incredibly rare sacred qi or natural qi, and some of them were home to spiritual qi. - Oleanderr01mthReplied to Daoistm7Yh5H
Well i see what you are trying to say but it is literally a bird. If you continue to read at some certain point you will see what she is actually. But whatever it is she is just a bird.
"What kind of demon are you?" Nalin questioned, and with that the woman transformed before their eyes, revealing her original form. Both Nalin and Vered had a very puzzled expression. Vered couldn't take it anymore and said "your father is a 7-tailed fox, but you are a bird I don't know...I didn't expect that." - Oleanderr01mthReplied to Daoistm7Yh5H
No sir.
"What kind of demon are you?" Nalin questioned, and with that the woman transformed before their eyes, revealing her original form. Both Nalin and Vered had a very puzzled expression. Vered couldn't take it anymore and said "your father is a 7-tailed fox, but you are a bird I don't know...I didn't expect that." - Oleanderr01mthReplied to Daoistm7Yh5H
Oh i did explain how do i use dao or dao qi in the future chapters, not close but yeah i did. For you to understand the ''qi'' consept that i use in my story has infinite directions. Literally there can be smell qi or maybe hearing qi. Qi is the qi we know yet i used it to make cultivators even more complicated. I hope i was able to explain what i was trying to say. Thank you for reading my novel <3
"MY KING, IS HERE!?" one of them shouted loudly as the group entered and he, like the whole group, could not believe his eyes. From the moment they stepped inside, their spiritual energy increased. Each of them noticed the sculptures, carvings, paintings, calligraphy, and to top it all off, the smell of good food wafting through their noses. Each of these artistic things literally possessed the incredibly rare sacred qi or natural qi, and some of them were home to spiritual qi. - Oleanderr01mthReplied to Daoistm7Yh5H
I legit have no idea what that is but ok i guess?
Mery, as if she knew this very well, said, "Yes, that's why most demons hated me. I am an unknown creature and I was adopted by the royal family." - Oleanderr01mthReplied to Firstanddotstealer
You do not need to worry, it is one of the things i hate the most.
The funny thing is that some of the eggs also produced animals that weren't born from the eggs. The first of these was a cat; this cat, which was white and black in colour, was Admon's first friend outside the system and Admon cared for it very much. The cat's name was Nalin and it was a female. - Oleanderr01mthReplied to YaeSena
I am glad that i was able to make you feel something. Thank you for reading!
"Should everything have a beginning? Or should the beginning remain an existence that must end everything? Is it in the hands of the gods to change fate? Or is every action we take our own?" The woman of immense strength in spirit kept talking to Petunia, it was certainly important for her to know such things. After all, the change of her fate would depend entirely on it, wouldn't it? - Oleanderr01mthReplied to Artem_Ville
Oh yeah, you will live that feeling quite a lot since when i write ''true emotions'' or ''important moments'' i make it quite complicated. Just write however i feel will be the best explanation for that. Sorry if it is too complicated or heavy to read <3
Nalin and Vered realised that their master was officially dead. Because Admon was neither breathing, nor showing signs of perspiration, nor showing any emotion, nor making any sound. It was really an incredible technique. - Oleanderr01mthReplied to Artem_VilleCh 1 I want To Rest