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Fat_Kahuna9dCommentedAs we stepped through the gates of the Solitude common district the the loud hubbub of the ducks slammed into us like a wall of noise and smell, except if the place could usually be compared to a complete mess that somehow ended up working, today it could quite easily be described as complete and utter chaos.- Fat_Kahuna13dPosted
I have really enjoyed this story so far, its taken a fun refreshing spin on the reincarnation schtick thats been going around alot. MC is nerfed at the begining but he quickly gets up to base line for DMC reboot dante, not too strong but also not too weak. I see a lot of reviews having an aneurisim about MC not being powerful and the first heap of chapters being tense AF and that theres no rest for the MC to develop but its definatly by design. MC wasnt brought to marvel to have fun, hes the little erand boy b**** for a eldritch bored GOD! Its chaotic, funny, filled with action, all in all a fun read, dont hate it cause its not you favourite dante template, cause its not meant to be the good one. The God is a chaotic being so dont expect the MC to be having a nice easy time, enjoy the action, the drama and the fun journey this story takes you on. Cant wait to read more.
- Fat_Kahuna13dCommented
Since when did deadpool become a blonde?
"I'm sorry," said Luna sadly. "I don't have any friends, so I don't know much about these things. I'll study up on friendship so that I can be a good friend by book five!" - Fat_Kahuna14dCommented
Doom music, the only thing they fear is you
Without warning, the doors surrounding them—all but the one they had entered through—flung open. The darkness beyond the threshold seemed alive, stirring with the ominous glow of multiple animalistic eyes reflecting the light from within the room. Deep, guttural growls rolled out from the shadows, filling the space with an overwhelming killing intent. - Fat_Kahuna25dCommented"Now, let us start of a fundamental aspect of magic: Geometry!!"
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Liver*
"Come on. Let there be something that can help my dad's kidney." I said as I rubbed my face in exhaustion before using the last luck boost and rolling the prize. - Fat_Kahuna29dCommented
Oh no no no, it's all good 😂
"Am I creepy?" she blinked and shrugged. - Fat_Kahuna1mthCommented[RoyKent: Hey I know that band. I went to their concert early this year.]
- Fat_Kahuna1mthCommentedMy words placed the Detective in a difficult decision. Taylor widened her eyes as she saw what I did and muttered, "Wow. You're the devil. A master manipulator."
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Didnt Andy Samberg give out an award tho, what is this double up shenanigans?!
"And I, am-no-way-related-to-Andy-Samberg, Detective Jake Peralta. We're here to ask a few questions." - Fat_Kahuna1mthCommented"Wait. Diaz. Do you happen to have a relative named Rosa Diaz, who works as a detective in New York?" I asked, intrigued as I studied her face, noting a resemblance.
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Frankie Dart from Community I think
Frankie crossed her arms together and tried to convince Ted. Her eyes were reddish and her face pale. She looked at Ted with a sympathetic expression before leaning towards him and gave him a comforting hug. - Fat_Kahuna1mthCommented[YT-1300 Corellian Freighter - Modified.]
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An AI image i made with the description as best i could
Now, as he heard that, he needed to get clothed as he then looked into the mirror, mildly surprised by the changes in his appearance. His skin got a bit paler, his hair looked like literal shining gold and his eyes turned from original electric blue to shining purple. - Fat_Kahuna1mthCommented
My condolences, hope you have lots of support during this tough time, know your community is here for you
My apologies for disappearing, but my father had died and it took me some time to recover. But here I am, back to daily updates. - Fat_Kahuna1mthPosted
This is a great FF, so much fun to read, MC takes no shit from anyone including the discount Gandalf and shit stain marauders and ain't afraid to slap a b**** when he does. Has a lot of good potential in the small crossovers started and I'm excited to see where it will breach out into. Very chaotic neutral character with some fun OCs, keep up the good work author 😁
- Fat_Kahuna1mthCommented
Man what a quack up
"Up the epidural." The doctor yelled, "Yes please up it, up it!" My screams continued each contraction providing an even greater amount of pain, who knew giving birth was so ducking painful. - Fat_Kahuna1mthReplied to Dr_Dred
Possibly this?
On a more defensive note, Axel didn't neglect the need for spatial fortification. He drafted blueprints for highly-advanced orbital defense platforms, utilizing cutting edge unslaved-AI management systems and armed with powerful MAC Cannons. Ensuring that these installations would be an effective deterrent against any potential enemy invasions on human colonies. - Fat_Kahuna2mthCommented
+1
A) Focus on and show Aldrif's growth and connection with her mom, teachers, the MC, and more in the soon to come chapters. Basically, have her own little arc, which will definitely include the MC unlike this previous and much longer than necessary sacrifice arc. Like this you will also be able to see her growth and change over time, to go from a bratty/shy child to a calm, composed, serious/comical huntress.