Daoist_Netherworld

story has a great premise and a lot of potential 😁😊

my suggestion is doing whatever you feel is necessary 😜 surely you had a vision starting this story 😯 now we wanna see that vision 😭

I'm loving everything in this story 😍 still waiting for Snu-snu 🔞🔞🔞 though

yes, 🙌 but you could use some proofreading apps if you wanna go more famous 😉

it's decent 😁👍 but it could use some updates 😀

absolutely 😁

no problem then😁 thank you for your hard work author-sama

author-sama, I'm not sure if you noticed but this is the wrong chapter (book) that you uploaded 😭

same as the previous chapter 😢😭

not gonna lie 😭 i love 💖 the slice of life in this chapter 💜 it was wholesome 😁 i also want a woman like Zhu Ming