awokenfen

Thanks for your review, it was very eye opening. First off I would like to thank you for taking the time to read my novel, I know it's probably not the best thing you read nor will it ever come close to that but I would still like to thank you for taking the time nonetheless. I'm happy to see such positive comments regarding my writing, even though I myself think it's kind wack at some points. I don't have the greatest control over the English language as it isn't really my first language, but I'm happy to see you liked it. As for the point you pointed out of the checkpoints, the story is currently still in it's very very early of it's development. Since you were comparing it to a game, I would say it's something like part 1 and 2 of the tutorial. I do agree the world building is at the moment, abysmal with barely any info. I definitely have more stuff planned in the future it's just that I barely have time to write. Which brings me to my next point, I can't write much which is mostly due to my studies. I'm currently doing this as a hobby and would like to just see how far it can go. Hopefully I would be able to update more frequently in the future. Once again I would like to thank you for your kind words and also constructive criticism. I hope you have a great day :)

Thanks for reading