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AculturedCitizen1dCommentedAnd heroes handle a lot of things, and representative of them are Lifesaving, Raiding Monster Gate, Villain suppression, and Monster extermination. These are the four that were mentioned in the novel.- AculturedCitizen4dCommented
The story barely begun and he already got a girl? The plot progression is all over the place man
And she was muttering something in low voice..." my precious" "my precious"? - AculturedCitizen4dCommented
For a SS rank she sure is blind
In that moment, I was taken aback by the boy's bravery and tenacity. It was as if I was witnessing a hunter, ready to pounce on its prey. The creature roared ferociously, attempting to intimidate or immobilize the boy, but he stood his ground, undaunted by the monster's display of power. - AculturedCitizen4dReplied to Walvd_
Ayo chill
"Well, I guess it was too early for me to face an A-Rank monster," I muttered to myself with a smile. - AculturedCitizen4dCommented
The novel seems a bit off. The guy was drowning in sorrow due to his girlfriend’s death, but woke up in a new world suddenly he is all energetic ? Of course I am not criticizing the author but I think the author recently read some reincarnation novels along with solo levelling and decided to write a story based on the fusion of those
As I faced the looming threat, I couldn't help but feel a burning desire to surpass my previous self, who was weak and pathetic. I had failed to protect the one I loved the most in my previous world, but I was determined not to repeat the same mistake in this one. - AculturedCitizen4dCommented
Ffs stop repeating the same sentence
He was not the herbivorous protagonist who often hesitated and did nothing when food was delivered to the door. - AculturedCitizen5dCommented
Good lord I’m this close to dropping this
After all, it was my job to get rid of tension like this. - AculturedCitizen6dReplied to Mr_Thief
- AculturedCitizen12dReplied to HyrosterCh 154 Chapter 152 ~ Haruka and Hibiki
- AculturedCitizen1mthPosted
I am not even joking when I say that, this fanfic has the potential to be the best DNA fanfiction ever. One of the reasons why DNA is extremely good because, Sawamura is not your OP protagonist who has some OP hidden skill. He is diamond in the rough, and has to stumble hard in order to get up and learn valuable lessons. There are some fan fictions in a A03 , which are extremely good in quality, but with OP Sawamura. While those are good , this has the potential to be THE best because , as the author is showing right now, Sawamura isn’t too OP and isn’t dominating the scene. This means that, we would see the process where he would get the physicality and mentality to pitch in higher pressure games and learn numbers. I only hope the author comes back soon.
- AculturedCitizen1mthReplied to Daoist_Dan
If everything goes well, this has the potential to be the best diamond no Ace fan fiction ever. I’m not even joking. One of the reason why diamond no Ace is immaculate It’s because the main character is an underdog. He isn’t your average OP protagonist, who can walk into any team in the sport. he stumbles, stumbles hard, but gets up while improving himself at a rapid pace. The best DNA fanfics such in A03 have OP Sawamura , which is great, but at some point it becomes monotonic. This Sawamura tho , is very good but still an underdog ( until now anyway) he is still learning and isn’t pitching Numbers as if it’s nothing. It’s a steady journey so it’s exciting to read . I only hope the author comes back again.
- AculturedCitizen1mthCommented
Sawamura in his previous life knew how hard Tanba and the third years worked for 3 years . This Sawamura is talking like as if he is very keen on snatching the ace number away from Tanba, which i understand the sentiment but not like him.
Ch 50 Chapter 50: Ace’s Fighting Spirit! - AculturedCitizen1mthCommented
I know I can’t blame the translator but this “demon king” gimmick is so cringe man. Why tf is that even a nickname for a middle school kid is beyond me . And one of the main reason why DNA is so good is because the MC is underrated , weak-to-strong for majority of the story. Judging by this , I can’t say how much good the story gets
Ch 48 Chapter 48: Slide! - AculturedCitizen1mthCommentedCh 36 36: The Final Test
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An overpowered Sawamura huh? I actually like this trope but man , the author is really putting Sawamura heads and heavens above any other player here , including the seniors. I’ll most probably drop it after reading next few chapters to see if it’s good or not
In middle school, Sawamura defeated Narumiya Mei. - AculturedCitizen1mthCommented
Come on man you’re taking this too far. This was just a funny scene in the anime and you are making it as it’s a war crime. I observed the same with how you handled Kanemaru, it’s as if you want every small thing to be a big mess
"Don't put on such an unsightly behavior, we are baseball players, so let's decide the outcome on the field." - AculturedCitizen1mthCommented
Chill with the exclamatory marks
Seo : I'm still waiting for your answer... Idiot!!! - AculturedCitizen1mthCommented
Tanba*
The Ace, Tanpa, who had been performing well this spring, suddenly collapsed in the second inning and lost four points in a row. Then he dropped another three in the third inning. - AculturedCitizen1mthCommented
Come on, let’s not do this. Kanemaru was the only guy who stuck with Sawamura during his Yips . He is a very great guy
But now, for some reason, they don't get along well with Sawamura.