BloodlineofKhaos
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BloodlineofKhaos1yrCommentedEnlightment? for greater emphasis??????
After several hours of contemplation, Allen Walker had finally attained enlightenment.- BloodlineofKhaos1yrCommented
had resulted in
He could only blame his luck, fate, destiny, or whatever conceptual matters that resulted in him being only average. - BloodlineofKhaos1yrCommented
he cant- couldnt . tense
He wanted to blame his parents, but he can't. He couldn't blame his parent's genetics because his little brother had proven that their parents' genetics are excellent and were capable of producing a <Supreme>. - BloodlineofKhaos1yrCommented
suggestion brink of sucide
Not only that, the constant pressure that his parents gave him that went like: "Why can't you be like your brother?" or "Why aren't you talented like your brother?" had driven him to the point of contemplating suicide. - BloodlineofKhaos1yrCommented
gave him that went like ---> gave him went like
Not only that, the constant pressure that his parents gave him that went like: "Why can't you be like your brother?" or "Why aren't you talented like your brother?" had driven him to the point of contemplating suicide. - BloodlineofKhaos1yrCommented
he was only called
A teenage boy who was tired of his life where he is only called nothing but average. He tried his best, but when faced with someone with talent, he was nothing more than an amateur when compared to a pro. - BloodlineofKhaos1yrCommented
had tried his best
A teenage boy who was tired of his life where he is only called nothing but average. He tried his best, but when faced with someone with talent, he was nothing more than an amateur when compared to a pro. - BloodlineofKhaos1yrCommented
average smile of his
"How come? I am your boyfriend it's my duty to this things for you" Her boyfriend said to her with smile of his average. - BloodlineofKhaos1yrCommented
*running
One thing that surprised me was that Loki was ruining at full speed behind us trying to catch up. He had a look of pure fury on his face. Wonder what that about. - BloodlineofKhaos1yrCommented
White Online - Bookwormwithbooks
Got any suggestions for things to read? - BloodlineofKhaos1yrCommented
@author just add another girl - friend and let the readers see whose synergy is better
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Banana
"No… Elders…" the king grinned. "Tell our scientists to pack their bananas, we're going on a vacation." - BloodlineofKhaos1yrCommented
error mine->my
"It isn't mine business." Pluto hummed as he looked around the place, seeing other paintings. "Again, I refuse." - BloodlineofKhaos1yrReplied to RUFFI