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BloodlineofKhaos2 years ago
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Lord of Nanites
Sci-fi · KingofMortals
BloodlineofKhaos2 years ago
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only wrong thing is updates schedule everything nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice
Forty Millenniums of Cultivation
Sci-fi · The Enlightened Master Crouching Cow
BloodlineofKhaos2 years ago
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Enlightment? for greater emphasis??????
After several hours of contemplation, Allen Walker had finally attained enlightenment.
Prodigy With Alternate Multiverse Chat Group System
Fantasy · ShadowKatake
BloodlineofKhaos2 years ago
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had resulted in
He could only blame his luck, fate, destiny, or whatever conceptual matters that resulted in him being only average.
Prodigy With Alternate Multiverse Chat Group System
Fantasy · ShadowKatake
BloodlineofKhaos2 years ago
Commented
he cant- couldnt . tense
He wanted to blame his parents, but he can't. He couldn't blame his parent's genetics because his little brother had proven that their parents' genetics are excellent and were capable of producing a <Supreme>.
Prodigy With Alternate Multiverse Chat Group System
Fantasy · ShadowKatake
BloodlineofKhaos2 years ago
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suggestion brink of sucide
Not only that, the constant pressure that his parents gave him that went like: "Why can't you be like your brother?" or "Why aren't you talented like your brother?" had driven him to the point of contemplating suicide.
Prodigy With Alternate Multiverse Chat Group System
Fantasy · ShadowKatake
BloodlineofKhaos2 years ago
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gave him that went like ---> gave him went like
Not only that, the constant pressure that his parents gave him that went like: "Why can't you be like your brother?" or "Why aren't you talented like your brother?" had driven him to the point of contemplating suicide.
Prodigy With Alternate Multiverse Chat Group System
Fantasy · ShadowKatake
BloodlineofKhaos2 years ago
Commented
he was only called
A teenage boy who was tired of his life where he is only called nothing but average. He tried his best, but when faced with someone with talent, he was nothing more than an amateur when compared to a pro.
Prodigy With Alternate Multiverse Chat Group System
Fantasy · ShadowKatake
BloodlineofKhaos2 years ago
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had tried his best
A teenage boy who was tired of his life where he is only called nothing but average. He tried his best, but when faced with someone with talent, he was nothing more than an amateur when compared to a pro.
Prodigy With Alternate Multiverse Chat Group System
Fantasy · ShadowKatake
BloodlineofKhaos2 years ago
Posted
Hello Well the author finally did it .He has finally made the story Pretty good written till now and fore shadowing is nice. Well we just need to wait for an editor now to jumpstart things
Post-Apocalyptic Dispatch Society
Action · Overlord_Venus