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Jiraboi_2yrReplied to SlowSharkCh 3 To endure- Jiraboi_2yrReplied to SlowShark
in which way tho 🕵️
That was when she woke up, screaming like a banshee. - Jiraboi_2yrReplied to SlowShark
dinosaur, right? Right??
Thalia couldn't help but think about what happened: she was alone, in a thick forest, scrambling between the broad thickets and heard a shrill, piercing howl in the distance. Her hands were muddied with soil and scratches ran down from her shoulder to her arm. It was a living hell. She could sense whatever it was, closing in on her. Running as far as her legs could take her, she paused momentarily to catch her breath, but that only gave them more time to catch up. She had to think, now, and fast. Otherwise, she was 100% sure she would've been mincemeat. Clustering her final efforts, the girl sprinted one more leg through the trees and on the other side, there was a clearing that led to a village! She heaved her legs in a herculean effort. But only, if life was that easy; an ominous fog menacingly enshrouded the clearing as if to trap her. She dropped dead on her knees. She was hopeless. Thalia whimpered- five canine beasts emerged from within the forest. Their eyes flared yellow and their fangs, bared wide open, were razor-sharp daggers. A heavy atmosphere of bloodlust soon dominated the once-present clearing and something about the beasts made Thalia think she was not their first snack. She scanned the pack. No weaknesses of any sort. And no signs of her being mistaken prey. She chuckled nervously- "I'm in danger." All five beasts advanced towards her in an elliptical fashion. There was simply no way of getting out of this. Thalia had said all her prayers (𝗲𝘃𝗲𝗻 𝘁𝗵𝗼𝘂𝗴𝗵 𝘀𝗵𝗲 𝗱𝗶𝗱𝗻'𝘁 𝗯𝗲𝗹𝗶𝗲𝘃𝗲 𝗶𝗻 𝗚𝗼𝗱) and already passed her thoughts onto her mother. Simultaneously, the canines pounced as a unit going for the kill. But from her peripheral vision, she saw a cloaked figure materialize behind the beasts. Her smile curved dangerously... and Cut! - Jiraboi_2yrReplied to SlowShark
she a baddie too
--She winked and retreated to the Living room-- - Jiraboi_2yrReplied to SlowShark
absolutely fantastic mate
"I dreamt Mr Davids was making his 'funny' maths jokes again" - Jiraboi_2yrPosted
Really love the rustic setting of the story and the various textual references weaved within the words. It has been an amazing read so far, the fast-building tension in the plot also compelled me to grow somewhat of an affinity with the main character. Definitely deserves more love, wishing this guy the best of luck with his future works.
- Jiraboi_2yrCommentedCh 5 Lowest place
- Jiraboi_2yrCommentedCh 3 Realization 0.3 ( final part)
- Jiraboi_2yrCommentedCh 2 Realization 0.2