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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole6d
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    Honestly this fanfic world background is the best among many novel i have read for naruto or otherwise but you should let the mc to keep retaining his full memories about naruto otherwise what's the point of reincarnation

    Ch 3 Chapter 3
    Naruto: Reborn As The Only Uchiha-Senju
    Anime & Comics · UchihaIzuna
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole6d
    Replied to Aaron_Chong_6689

    well he could kill danzo and take the jutsu,hashirama cell etc i am not saying he has to change the plot but he shouldn't just focus on the main characters how good they are or overall helping them by changing their genetics etcc

    RE: Black-Light
    Anime & Comics · Aaron_Chong_6689
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole7d
    Replied to Aaron_Chong_6689

    Well the mc hold himself back from changing the plot i mean look at the chapter in which kurenea was tortured by orochimaro and he didn't did anything to him because he just know that he will turn good in the original plot but the world is real for him like kurenea was not captured by orochi in the original but was captured in this story

    RE: Black-Light
    Anime & Comics · Aaron_Chong_6689
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole8d
    Posted

    this story is excellent but i think the battle between everyone who fight mc is exaturated i mean the people of naruto do not have the vitality to withstand tha beating and injuries that mc gives to his opponents

    Naruto Law of the Devil
    Anime & Comics · DemonWriter
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole10d
    Posted

    The story background is good but the Mc is obsessed with keeping the plot the same and not changing it

    RE: Black-Light
    Anime & Comics · Aaron_Chong_6689
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole11d
    Posted

    the story is better than some i read but i don't get it why is naruto the same as before and don't hate the village.

    Naruto-SoulFusion
    Anime & Comics · The_SaadKhan
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole20d
    Commented

    and please don't involve sakura

    Ch 4 Quick Poll of Sasuke's Future Lover(s)
    The Greatest Shinobi [Sasuke SI]
    Anime & Comics · One_Salvation
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole20d
    Commented

    have naruto genderbent

    Ch 4 Quick Poll of Sasuke's Future Lover(s)
    The Greatest Shinobi [Sasuke SI]
    Anime & Comics · One_Salvation
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole1mth
    Commented

    good chapter but please don't have him revive the enemies he killed then just say that thanks for the fun

    Ch 139 Showdown
    Marvel : Godly Lottery System
    Movies · Lord_Immortal_0170
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole1mth
    Commented

    why make him op when he can't even kill someone trying to kill him and his mother does he not have a dragon bloodline?

    Ch 31 Chapter 31 Confronting Tang Hao.
    I Reincarnated in Douluo and Became a Member of Multiverse Chat Group.
    Anime & Comics · Chaotic_Sovereign
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole9mth
    Posted

    mc is getting to arrogant and is still treating the world as a game that he play

    Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)
    Book&Literature · Se7en
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole1yr
    Posted

    why are you making the mc as simp for hermione there are much better characters than her you are just making mc plot follower

    Harry Potter : God of magic system
    Fantasy · Star_monarch
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole1yr
    Posted

    mc should have at least somewhat numb emotion or detached from the world after spending so many years in the void all alone but he is actiong like a fanboy who meet his crush

    Highschool DxD: The Ultimate
    Anime & Comics · NinjaKilla
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole1yr
    Posted

    this mc is boring and coward without an ambition 👎👎🤮

    Multiversal: The Shop
    Anime & Comics · Charlottes
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole1yr
    Commented

    harem is ok but please don't add to much devil girl or rias peerage

    Ch 16 Meeting The In-Laws.(Edited)
    The Dragon God of Tyranny(DxD)
    Anime & Comics · God_Of_Wolves
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole1yr
    Commented

    why is the mc sticking to durdsley and folowing the plot with superman power he should at least do something diffrent from the cannon

    Ch 3 Diagon Alley
    Super Harry Potter
    Movies · goldfish_korra
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole1yr
    Commented

    i don't understand is the mc actual harry potter or a reincarnated person?

    Ch 3 3. Learning Magic
    New Life as Harry Potter
    Book&Literature · 97126205
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole1yr
    Commented

    it's all cliche i don't know if mc is a devil or a naive dense and idiotic protaganist

    Ch 1 Young Devil Gathering/Evil Pieces
    Moved to different Account
    Anime & Comics · Nparks141k
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole1yr
    Commented

    mc is a weeb and every weeb know magic is influenced by emotion i think he should have been able to figure it out by atleast 2 or 3 months not years and think of it like he made a new discovery

    Ch 7 Time With Family
    HP With Chat System
    Book&Literature · EyeOfSilver
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  • asss_hole
    asss_hole1yr
    Replied to LifeIsAJoke

    well he doesn't have to destroy but make his own faction and kill those whose in his path

    Ch 3 3. Plans!
    In an Amalgam World as the Master of Death!
    Anime & Comics · LifeIsAJoke
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