Dexter007

good concept for the fanfic but please do correct the pronoun isn't the mc male the last few paragraph dectate the mc as female[img=update]

zhongli or Kevin kalsana

tfc finally someone killing protagonist who are protected by the world survive only through plot armor instead of cleverness and strength

man I get you anywhere in paksitan there is no stable internet access especially in current situation

he is saying about saving people because he has power he wouldn't talk like this if he were weak or even simple jonin level power

the third raikage isn't this exaggerated strong he has many weakness such as sealing technique,limited chakra,water and wind ninjutsu even a stronger lightning attack and so on and about surviving rasenshuriken many people forget that he was in reanimated form when he fought Naruto

Tfc

the mc has become more passive and lazy as the story goes on he hasn't accomplished any great thing and power levels are of the chart

with ophis by his side he still let go of finishing geto or gojo what apathetic person talking about being hero when he can't even protect his family properly let them be In danger because oh him then just forget it like it's not his fault

I know it's just that story theme and background for the mc is one of the best for person reincarnated in sao so far others somehow has real power in sao irl through sheer nonesense