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The female lead is very hypocrite, she pretends to be a decent woman but she uses her drunkenness as an excuse to seduce a married man. Her best friend, Casie is much way better than her, who has morals. Irish is a desperate slut or maybe worst than a whore😌Writer, change your female lead personality, please. Don't let your story becomes wasted by writing an indecent character or personality of your female lead
The story would have been good, but the male lead doesn't know how to think of a solution. He is weak and slow, and he needs to sacrifice a lot of people and even use people just to achieve his goals. Selfish and brainless male lead!😭 Common knowledge about pregnant woman should not grieve or be upset but what does the male lead's method, he only puts the female lead in danger and disaster. He only loves the female lead because she is useful to him. I suggest to change your disgusting male lead writer🤨How many women he needs to use just to achieve his goal, can't he do it alone without having to take advantage of people? Why he is so weak and troublesome? Much better if his forever in vegetable state😆
I don't like the character of the female lead. She is brainless and so weak. She deserved to be tortured by her husband because she is so ambitious. She only know how to rely on men. She has no ability or skill to work and earn money. I feel sorry for Vernom if he end up with her in the end. He deserve a smart, pure, kind and strong woman.
Why Lucas is so slow finding out the truth. He'll wait until everything becomes complicated and hurt Ellena even more like his stupid brainless mother who doesn't know how to differentiate between good and bad people. Lucas does not deserve Ellena. She should be with a man who can protect her from start to end. She will only get hurt with Lucas, physically and mentally. Lucas stupid mom, hope she'll die with full of regrets. Since she is willing to help the vicious woman Michelle then she deserve to have a mental breakdown.