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Hey was curious about writing myself eventually - how do you do youâre writing? Do you like to sit down and dedicate x amount of time to writing and you get what you get Or more goal oriented? IE âI need 3k words out of this writing sessionâ Curious what works best for consistency
This is a pretty decent story, likeable characters, decent writing, decent humor, unique premise with a lot of potential at the time of my writing this though which is 82 chapters in it is dealing with a pitfall a lot of stories fall into in that the story feels like it gets stuck a lot. The author is moving the plot forward but it is pretty slow and there are a lot of stretches where the story feels like a car spinning itâs wheels in the mud a lot of noise and the car is doing something, but nothing is happening. I would recommend it because of what I listed first but just heads up.
Hey thanks for putting in the time and effort after finding and reading through the first 80 chapters you put out I went and found the best mtl I could, copy and pasted into google docs and took the time to find and replace the Chinese translated names for pokemon and a few other things with their actual ones so I could read it on my own, one of the few examples of the Chinese epic length story style working fantastically. So again thanks for the time and effort.
Hey I havenâ read other comments yet but I wasnât really too upset to be honest Iâm actually pretty excited for the final chapter. Your expanation for why no alduin made complete sense and will allow for a much more fun ending rather then mopping up alduin and harkon one after another you have a fun dragonbornless rictus and restored vs harkon stormcloaks bang to go out on Really excited for itđđđđđđ Also just curious if you plan to continue with new stories after this and if so whether or not you have fleshed out ideas or just loose ideas about universes youd like to work with?
My only question is how fast you plan to end it? because stuff like the falmer and snow elves and other mid sized plot points seems to lose relevance when your so near the final act of the story IE - WE FOUGHT AND LOST TO ALDUIN- WERE PLANNING TO FIGHT HIM AGAIN BETTER THIS TIME- we cured the falmer- WE CAPTURED A DRAGON, WE FOUGHT AND NARROWLY BEAT ALDUIN WE FOUGHT AND KILLED HARKON THE END Figured Iâd ask cause it doesnât seem like it fits and other middling plot points will kinda face the same problem at this point Other than that awesome story and thanks for writing
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