Salsaman

Thanks for the effort hope you make a full recovery👍

This is the most confusing story on Webnovel, How it is so popular outside of botting makes no fucking sense. The grammar is atrocious, from chapter 1 to a 1000 there is seemingly no improvement.(I don’t expect perfection I expect high school level literacy) The writing style is at a 2nd grade level And cringeworthy on top of it. Quote with slight paraphrasing from story [Giovanni “how did you know?” Julian “I know a lot about you Giovanni, or should I say… boss of team rocket!”] The above line is said with complete seriousness, and similar lines are common. The story itself is bland, derivative, and sluggish in Every. Single. Chapter. Every battle I checked out was unimaginative, short, and boring. Author wouldn’t understand characterization is someone loaded it into a nuclear missle and ended their civilization with it. The only caveat I’ll give to those who like it and saw something I didn’t is that I admittedly skipped around through it because I was desperately trying to figure out what the fuck could possibly be appealing about this story and failed at every turn (10-30 read chapters throughout) Rivaling abandon borne for longest garbage fic people like for some reason Look elsewhere

Hey was curious about writing myself eventually - how do you do you’re writing? Do you like to sit down and dedicate x amount of time to writing and you get what you get Or more goal oriented? IE “I need 3k words out of this writing session” Curious what works best for consistency

Just curious how far you think you can take it as other translations are only up to 1400ish chapters and become practically unreadable around 1100 Fantastic story though so super excited to see if you can fill in the rest. ……………….

This is a pretty decent story, likeable characters, decent writing, decent humor, unique premise with a lot of potential at the time of my writing this though which is 82 chapters in it is dealing with a pitfall a lot of stories fall into in that the story feels like it gets stuck a lot. The author is moving the plot forward but it is pretty slow and there are a lot of stretches where the story feels like a car spinning it’s wheels in the mud a lot of noise and the car is doing something, but nothing is happening. I would recommend it because of what I listed first but just heads up.

Would you be willing to give us a progress update?

Hey just curious all chapters look like they have been updated, was it major changes or just polishing?

The collective hungers

Hey thanks for putting in the time and effort after finding and reading through the first 80 chapters you put out I went and found the best mtl I could, copy and pasted into google docs and took the time to find and replace the Chinese translated names for pokemon and a few other things with their actual ones so I could read it on my own, one of the few examples of the Chinese epic length story style working fantastically. So again thanks for the time and effort.

Hey just rered the story was curious about how you’re doing right now? really excited for every arc that seems to be up next.