Zeroformula1

Shouldn’t this be “what” or “huh”? No hate, just curious on the choice.

A good read for passing the time even without full context of the atla world.

I had thought there were missing segments of the story at first. But as it turns out the author just writes and let’s the reader fill in blanks while more is explained later on. Good read so far.

From a quick glance it seems most of the negative feedback comes from power/power level/how a saiyan should act and so on. I tend not to dwell too hard on that side of it as most of that stuff is arbitrary. Only big gripe I have is digging into multiple settings. Most fan fics feel more coherent when it sticks to just one world or in this case, multiverse. Will be giving a higher score to balance things a bit.

I will fully admit to the fact that I was baited by the cover art for this Fan-fic. While I had expected certain things, the fact that the story takes its time and progresses with a flawed protagonist is plus in my book. Instead of a way to pass time I’d say this is a good read. Can recommend as something other than the instant gratification works that are more prevalent on the site/app.

You’ll get what you came for in terms of erotica. On a surprising note, the characters and their interactions outside of the smut is quite good. I wouldn’t mind if the author ever just decided to make story without the sexual theme, or less of it.

A good read to pass the time. The protagonist does not gain immediate obscene power. There is also not a sudden endless que of love interests who are jumping at the character. This may be upsetting to some but further into the story it wouldn’t feel bad if the guy did grow crazy powerful or gets a love interest or two since it has been built up. All in all it’s an above average fan-fic compared to many others on the site.

As someone currently biased towards this particular kind of fan fiction I am giving a generous rating so that I may continue to read this when there are more chapters available.