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IceMonarch4dCommentedum I mean I don't think Klaus is that nice of a person to just rip out his enemy's limbs.. given his character and history I am pretty sure he has done things more horrible than this..
Marcel took one step back from the shock while Rebekah looked away from the horrid image in front of her. She had been witness to many horrors and partaken in many more, but this made even her stomach turn, not realizing that her brother was far from done.- IceMonarch6dCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1
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Don't tell me.. yuck I don't even want to think about it
She was now far slimmer than before and was slowly regaining the charm she had in her early years. - IceMonarch11dCommented
No harem yeah Caroline and Klaus sounded good but yeah no need for that given she is you know not suited besides you already have the best girl in the series in my opinion who I don't think would even agree about harem
yet the most important question lingered on his mind. should he have a harem???? maybe an army of tribrids at his command. - IceMonarch12dCommented
Hey can you use ”” instead for conversations
Klaus sights bringing everyone out of their thoughts. - Marcel is correct, klaus says as he turns looking at all 3 of them, each showing small hint of surprise. We cannot reveal our alliance as of yet, it will make them feel cornered and force them to act out in desperation, Klaus said having everyone attention. - IceMonarch12dCommented
Not gonna lie the last three were cliche and not the ones I would consider.. though they are powerful but in the entire fictional world I don't think they rank much higher.. if it were for me I would go for.. gojo, anos, yogiri takatou, Saitama, rimuru. Super OP
[Compiling character models, Gojo satoru, Anos VoldiGOAT, Edward Newgate, Madara Uchiha and Naruto Uzumaki] - IceMonarch12dPosted
Ok I was so excited to finally read ff based on this novel but I all died down after first chapter.. the mc is your normal idiot who has no goal and strives to live low key life, stupid with no ambition yeah you can say that... the MCs power was first said to be sign in system but later the will of multiverse comes forward and talks bullshit giving him power same as wang teng and reversing timeline.. I mean what kind of bs is that.. if you want to give that power from the start why not do so..
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Sorry but this is just plain stupid now... sigh
The voice continued again, "But after choosing you I was afraid that you would also become like Wang Teng, so I restricted your powers." - IceMonarch12dCommented
All the hype from the first chapter is gone now..
'Whew..', I don't want my low key life to be disturbed. - IceMonarch12dCommented
Yeah now why don't you just give everything to him now
[Yes, Host can control when and what attribute bubbles to drop.] - IceMonarch12dCommented
Oh wow wonderful with this how can wang teng be not sus of him and want to kill him?
[Host does not need to worry, skills and physiques or anything given by the system cannot be copied.] - IceMonarch12dCommented
Um well considering wang tengs system this system is nothing in my opinion... and I don't think even with this system he could hold a light in from of wang teng
[Host, sign in missions would be assigned to randomly and after signing in rewards would be given.] - IceMonarch12dCommented
more than that but I dropped it after the war in which wang teng from the future appeared... You know the novel went downhill from the moment the aliens and intergalactic beings were mentioned
Like of course it was a 2000+ chapter novel. - IceMonarch12dCommented
Oh yeah a complete attribute martial arts ff? I have great hopes for it
This World Isn’t Right! - IceMonarch12dCommentedCh 18 fool of themselves
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Noooo! Add mother too please..
This book has been deleted. - IceMonarch15dCommented
What? I mean if the apocalypse happens the same way as mentioned in novel I would definitely ponder about moving given where I was.. I mean seriously according to him there was dangerous weather so he doesn't know much about outside world so there is no strategic advantage of living in the place he was in.. secondly won't it be better to built a safehouse in a less populated country and totally isolated lands where he won't have to care about much of human interactions which can be dangerous for him moreover if zombie apocalypse or something happened it would be better to be in such places.. If I was in a country like the US I would definitely be moving out considering that there are more guns than people in that country which is unsafe to live at even in peaceful times not to mention in the apocalypse under all that chaos
Building a safe house and stocking up supplies is all about stability, so you want Eugene to take risks abroad? - IceMonarch16dCommented
First of all its been so long since you had updated, this is probably one of the best Pokemon fic I have ever read so I am thrilled about it so can you please update more frequently and secondly can you be less reliant on ai like on this one? I know AI is really useful but can you limit the usage to just spelling check and likes because it's just makes the story monotonous and complicated which downgrades the reading experience
Ch 236 Momentum - IceMonarch17dCommented
Wait so mc doesn't know about the future?..
'I don't understand most of it but , it is for the good, I think , may be I should just live a new life here ??.....Sigh I will think about it later . '