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you don’t scam people by explaining and making them understand. it nearly always works by confusing them and make them think they should do whatever it is you want them to do. watch better call saul they make an amazing work of showing how scamming people actually works.
get rid of redundancies like this. you just said they died. Saying that it made him an orphan is redundant. It feels as if you are saying that we can’t think of it ourselves. Basically some people will think you consider them stupid.
with the lack of good stories recently this may happen.
something tells me the real number is 42069😂
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you can just say it’s AU. after all it is actually imposible to make a story in the third shinobi war without making up stuff because canon has more holes in the third shinobi war than suiz cheese.
what is this supposed to mean i’m so confused.
that just sounds stupid
why even stab him and waste millions of points it’s just plain stupid and lazy writing just saying i’m making a lot so it doesn’t matter. It would be the same as if a billionaire just burns millions dolars. no one no matter how rich would just literaly throw milions in the trash can. It is sad seeing the quality of the story withering away as the author makes things just for the shock value.
she wasn’t a normal human she has nosy butch energy over 9000.
isn’t he supposed to be an SI?
author rapier’s can’t be used as swords siply because they are thin. which also means more fragile. The reason why they wheren’t widely used is because they can only be used effectively in long range stabbing attacks. their only advantages are that they are longer and faster at attacking than swords. they are also very fragile and very telegraphed. Which is the reason you have to be very fast when using them.
there is no way a rapier can lice through bone in a single go. it would just snap halfway.
the mere fact the he is alive is pure stupidity.
I honestly think the idiot is the author that wants us to believe that the sword master that was training him didn’t gave him a lesson on not underestimating his oponentes.
Why a rapier. aren’t they too long and fragile. Sure it’s a fast attacking wepon, but has way less maneuverability than a short sword. Also rapiers so too little damage and there is no way a rapier is getting through any armor. So it is only effective against unarmored opponents. a rope dart would be a much better wepon for the MC. it would fit much more with his highly maneuverable and agile fighting style. It would also make much more damage than a rapier.