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pratik_chauhan

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  • pratik_chauhan
    pratik_chauhan2mth
    Replied to Allevatore_dicapre

    Sorry, my bad. I thought I saw one, but I guess less sleep is catching up to me.

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    Villain's Survival: I refuse to be the Mc's stepping stone
    Fantasy · Allevatore_dicapre
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  • pratik_chauhan
    pratik_chauhan2mth
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    I am writing this review after reading till the latest chapter right now (52 chapters). The writing quality is good. Not extremely good and not extremely bad. It is written mostly in the first person POV. Still better than most of the books (While I suspect the author may rely on assistance from GPT, as long as the pace and quality of the chapters remain consistent, I have no issues with it.) So far, not much story development has occurred, but there have been reasonable developments according to the pace of the novel (which is good imo). The protagonist isn't portrayed as an outright villain but rather as a cunning and intelligent character. Although there are some inconsistencies in the protagonist's personality (it's not not a big turn off. so you can still read if you were planning to read). Despite the harem tag, there seems to be only one potential member introduced till now (not sure on that as her relationship with the MC hasn't progressed significantly yet.). We don't know much about the world background yet. The author is dropping only pieces of information about the world in between the story (which is good as I prefer this over an info dump about the whole world in a single chapter.) If you enjoy stories where the MC transmigrates into a novel they've read, this one is worth a shot.

    altalt
    Villain's Survival: I refuse to be the Mc's stepping stone
    Fantasy · Allevatore_dicapre
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  • pratik_chauhan
    pratik_chauhan6mth
    Commented

    If they were nearby, then why didn't they die when the meteor crashed?

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  • pratik_chauhan
    pratik_chauhan2yr
    Posted

    Nice power system and unique abilities. just some grammer problems and typos. Book with potential but depends on the author if he can further improve his writing skills.

    altalt
    The Disappointments Ascent
    Fantasy · Xealous
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  • pratik_chauhan
    pratik_chauhan2yr
    Commented

    a mask like ken kaneki would have been much cooler.

    I reached my office by four in the morning and just like I expected my boss was already there shouting at some new employees in the parking lot for wearing their uniform wrong. I parked my bike and took off my helmet as the cold morning wind blew against my face which was only protected by a mask for health reasons and a black cloth covering my left scarred eye. I had gotten the idea from quite a popular character names Gojo and it looked cool enough for me so I had decided to wear this on my left eye whenever I went out.
    altalt
    Infinity and Magic (Harry Potter Fanfic)
    Anime & Comics · ASHARA
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  • pratik_chauhan
    pratik_chauhan2yr
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    If you are going to explain the details of their talks slowly in the later chapter, why didn't you just skipped it in this chapter and wasted the words summarising it. Half of then half of the chapters was only the summary of their talk☹️. Anyways, I will come tomorrow for the new chapter😔. ps: thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 197 Learning Magic Sense (1)
    altalt
    Legacy of the Dark Sage
    Fantasy · Lessyr
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