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I was hoping Ayin could be a Titled Douluo and help his mother with her Martial Soul problem. Though I guess her strength doesn’t really matter.

Although I know it’s all needed because we can’t have Tang San die too early, after all that talk, he’s doing the same thing as Qian Renxue and not killing Tang San when he’s weak.

If you want to see a Mc suffer the whole way and dance in the palm of disgusting characters, you might enjoy this. Though you’ll probably feel like you wasted time in the end.

Make MC a God and make him super strong then nerf them to the ground. I know the Danmachi universe has this setting but I feel it was poorly executed here. So this is a #strongtoweak kind of story? God’s don’t really have a path to getting stronger in Danmachi. They can only collect children to make their familia stronger. So his strength now will be his strength later unless you break the rules on Gods. But if you’re gonna break them anyway, why let people walk all over him now? Unless you’re gonna add another cheat later that doesn’t break the rules? But unfortunately, I already want to drop it after this chapter. Anyway, just trying to give honest feedback that hopefully helps.

If you mean the MCU, the timeline is right. The post-credit scene of Iron Man 2 is when Phil Coulson first fibds Mjolnir.

Sorry, I think this is as far as I can go. I just don’t like this kind of MC. To be honest, he seems like a fool to me. His reactions to situations doesn’t make me empathize with him at all. Having arrogance but no strength is just suicidal behavior and I can’t even use the excuse that he’s a child who doesn’t know the world since he’s already old and knows the plot. Thank you though for trying to write Danmachi since I like the world setting but there’s not enough interesting fanfic out there in my opinion.

I tried but had to give up. Maybe it gets better later on but it just seems like nothing relevant happens or when they do, no change occurs afterwards. Maybe I just don’t resonate with this kind of MC that seems to just live in his own little bubble. I feel like the story is trying to make the MC as pitiful as possible so that we can be moved? But the execution just doesn’t quite deliver.

Guess some people like this type of story? I feel like story went downhill really fast. I know the author is trying to keep the MC from being OP (I mean 5 years of little to no change, completely brushed off the roots incident as if it didn’t happen, system can’t do anything) but is making the MC stressed gonna be a recurring theme?

Actually, I feel it’s quite fresh. Bringing a more daily life theme to Mahouka is challenging since all the intereting plots involve combat, fighting, or competitions. So keep going author. 👍