Every character is a detailed persona, not just a waste of words. Every action scene, or in general description of images and scenery is almost like watching a slideshow of pictures instead of reading words Great action, Amazing plot twists, Addicting plot.

Great chapter

Great chapter. So much improvement from the first ten you posted. Keep up the good work!

Great pilot chapter. Very impressive use of words to describe the situation in the opening paragraph. Additionally, it ends the chapter with an intriguing mystery.