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For those who may nocite it, Yes I saw the "Translate" label. BUT, I personnaly witnessed numerous author hiding behind that label to smooth criticism and been none assuming. In those case, good for them, internet people are mean and constructive comment are as rare as unicorn. If that's his case, all I can say is: you did a thing. Is it a bad thing?🫵 Maybe?🤷 But you did a thing 👍.
Not much. Regular MC glazzing, and happy "coincidence" aka plot armor (oblivious one at that). But it's still strange how I find myself reading this again. The grammar and pacing is honestly shit (but hopefully improving??🤷) and the update are instable; so author: If it's Translation : edit better or use AI, in this case it's not shamefull. If it's original : not to be mean nor assuming, but I hope this is an early projet or a test, 'cause many improvement are needed. All in all, for a fanfic with the principe is in the title (Ben 10 and Gender swap + others), it seem quite shity but with good intentions. Again, I'm only been honest so don't drop or anything. Only by presevering you become better ; so do go on 🫡
Strangly decent. Not good, decent. Worth giving a chance. And [Not so spoiler] It's not "entierly" what you expected. Again worth a read at your own risk 🤷😐
It's surprisingly good, and refreshing. Don't get me wrong; it's generic, Yes; it's cliché, Yes. But it plays with a nostalgia I didn't know I had. Keep up mate, it's a good fic 👍🫡
Yes, Webnovel search engine is crap.[img=Out of it][img=Unalived] If you want to find a specific novel, go to other novel website like NovelUpdate or other, search your preference (with tags or other), then take the title to Webnovel for easy find. Or read your novel directly on those site. Your chose.[img=recommend]
Oppenheimer resurrected!!! For good? Hopefully! No ranting or gibberish this Time (sadly for All m'y fan 🥲) but a genuine advise (totally discardable of course 👍), that's is: instead of formating each and every Time yours work (now that I say it, Why s'that?🤔), put them as Archive. Mermorabilia if You like🧐. But as always, You are free to take the advise of a slightly intellectual insane individual as You wish🫡. Even if The individual is a self-proclaimed "Expert" 😎. As He is learning from an "Expert" too. HIMSELF!!!
Copy paste isn't out right Bad as long as it IS assumed. If The author and sauce are given, it's sharing. And this is Indeed a master piece.
Oppenheimer IS BACK! 🍾 And his name isn't Oppenheimer still.🤔 Meh. Who Cares about my crazy gibberish 🤷. Welcome BACK Partner 👍 WE missed You 🥹 And in Hope this FF being a good one, here some approval
Just a small rant from my part. So ignore it as You wish. ALL of your stories are "Good", but riddle with flaws and inconsistance. And that's OK!!😁 They are Fanfictions, means to entertain, not flawless litterary bestseller. And they do their job: Entertaining. That's all they're is to ask.🥰 Now the small rant as promise. A brief critic of 3 of your work "not really to my taste": 1. Riser Phenex isn't a villain: as all your work have in common, this one too Say "fuck the plot", but more thoroughly; a little too much even. It's looks like something went wrong in the process, and then it goes "fuck it! I ain't fixing that. It's part of the plot now!". In this particular story, I felt that You are forcing way to much in practically everything. And it's going from comedic FF, to serious, to crack fic. Losing me in the way. 2. Is it wrong to become a scumbag: all in all a good FF. The MC has a goal, drive, character arc-ish, and a classic Akikan FF plot progression. A good point to highlight is the fact that the MC isn't "Préfecture" in this (in most Akikan FF the MC is mister perfect, borderline omnipotente). What makes me ranting here is that the entier story not in Rakudai Kishi feels like fillers, losing impact and coherence; throwing me out along the line. 3. Tanuki Rise of the yokau clan: criticizing this one was unpleasant ,'cause I love Nurarihon no mago, I FUKING LOVE IT. But it's called a rant for something, so let's move on. Fortunately, the Nurarihon no mago was impeccable (biased much), and the rest was OK-is. The réal problem was the MC, he is Too Perfect. It's like watching Saitama from One Punch Man, making us loose interest in the MC, and more focused one the secondary character, which are not dwelled on. Ok, that's it for the monthly ranting of a slightly crazy Guy with to much Time on his hand😎. ALL in all, I love your work, thank your for blessing us poor mortals with your magnificent Art. And good Day to You sir. 👍
Let us all be honest. It's the classic cliché Sign-in System Chinesse translates FF (decent translation by the way). The chance are good that it's just an édit for an existing translation ( which again ain't Bad). But that's just the premise. The story in it's self is, again, a cliché. BUT!!! a cliché is a cliché for a reason, and up to here (chap 23), it's quite Ok-ish. Will it remain is the question though. Either way, it's passable at best and slightly annoying at worst.So for now, TATAKAE!