Good start. You can feel that author has idea of world and main concept. First 50 chaps are good. Interaction between characters has interesting development. And dynamic of story feels good. But after 50 chapter or so things are started get weird. Story become too unreal and you get feeling that actions are happening coz author wants then to happen, so logical part is missing. I recommend to read only start of novel to get the idea and stop at this point.

Did I miss reason why is Omega ending?