DBxBerserk

Still reading it, there aren’t many good shadow slave fan fics. Just pointing out that reactions don’t make sense. When sunny gained the nightmare horse he died tens of thousands of times. So when you make his reaction over the top it just doesn’t make sense. There are other things along the same line that just don’t make sense

Your grammar sucks, and I don’t understand what the point of making him seem weak is. Not even average or above average, just weak. And all the conversations and reactions are stupid and pointless.

Honestly just sell her to wander Frey

Morrrrreeeeeee

Choom*

Great chapter, keep it up chuum

This story has been great so far!!!! Keep it up

More chapters!!

Crazy crazy stab stab