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AlmightyPen2 years ago
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Fairly original concept, and the mystery behind Vivi’s powers is intriguing. Good work so far, however the grammar leaves something to be desired at times. Overall, would recommend for OP fans 👍
One Piece: Reincarnated as Vivi
Anime & Comics · Krio_Genix
AlmightyPen2 years ago
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*either
She consider for a moment turning back to where she came from, but there was nothing there eighter, just more black void. So she continued walking forward.
One Piece: Reincarnated as Vivi
Anime & Comics · Krio_Genix
AlmightyPen2 years ago
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*finish
"If you can make that thing hit the same place I may be able to fishing breaking it." Said Zoro while standing up.
One Piece: Reincarnated as Vivi
Anime & Comics · Krio_Genix