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Okay, congrats you got my attention with your little "review". I use review in quotations because it's less of a review and more of you complaining that my character isn't some ruthless bastard with no personality and wants to fuck every girl in the world. If you want a shit story like that, read "Castle of Black Iron" (real suggestion btw) But until then, I'm not taking flack from a level one degenerate such as yourself. How about you do something productive like your life like writing a novel yourself about a self-insert piece of shit mc who is batshit insane and has no character growth or development whatsoever. I'm gonna be honest I don't really think I should be chewing out what I could only assume to be a 15 year old edgelord with nothing better to do than search for nsfw novels, but to be honest you sound like you need friends. Have the kids at school been picking on you lately? If so, perhaps you should probably take less of your parents advice and don't be yourself, because if this is yourself I could see where the dislike comes from. You know what, I just realized that you must really have no life. To actively spend time out of your day to shit on an upcoming novel, well damn, you must really be craving my attention. If you truly have distaste for it, then don't read. Instead here I have a poorly structured paragraph with shitty grammar explaining to me why a nobody like you doesn't like my main character. Well let me tell you something, if you perhaps spent more of your time reading real books instead of self-insert sex journeys, you'd have better taste and maybe better grammar. I could recommend a few such as Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint, or Reincarnated with the Strongest System

Of course not. Although, I'm currently dead inside and am taking a break. I'll probably come back with a bang in a month or two.

Oof, how do you guys feel about 7 straight chapters about fighting? I imagine that'll be a bit rough, so I'll add some more filler in between.

Hey guys, it's your least favorite author Xharp here just letting you know that this was actually my first attempt at writing. Yeah, I know I said it was "Stealing the Protagonist's Harem" but naw. This is actually the universe that Raine came from though and was my inspiration to start anew. Anyways, I plan on writing a lot about this universe in every new novel I post to expand, cause I'm just built different.

This is just a copy of the story I'm entering into the contest. The real novel is called "Stealing the Protagonist's Harem" if you liked this, I recommend going there.

I don't mind one bit, plus, most of the suggestions you have made I have already implemented into the next chapters lol. I already have a decent chunk of the next arc done since my schedule just got a lot busier, so I'm taking a small break to develop more chapters in a shorter time. -About your suggestions, and I will only give a small amount of insight as to not spoil any fun. Unfortunately, in both novels, Aaron had no childhood friends. Namely because he was branded a traitor's son so early in his life, so he never got the chance to make friends. -Also, about Raine's future development, I started this novel mainly to get away from the "underdeveloped heroines and side characters" cliché, so the odds of Raine ending up like the average manhua protagonist are unfathomably low. Even so, there are still only about 3 heroines in the next arc that will be for him. There will be quite a few fight scenes in quick succession for various reasons, so I'll just release all those at the same time. I will avoid saying anything more since I hate spoilers, so do with this snippet of info what you will. Thank you for the comment and I hope to live up to your expectations. You're kinda like a novel analyst the way you predict these kinds of things, it's crazy lol.

Thank you for your kind words dearest reader.

Hey man, thanks for your comment. I like reading your reviews. As for your question, the author will indeed have a huge impact on the next arc, that will also be a time-skip. Thanks for reading, I hope I don't disappoint with the next arc.

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Alright guys, now that my first arc is done, I can freely talk about the next one. First off, I'll be taking a small break, nothing huge, just a few weeks to get my next arc in order before posting. Until then, give me some suggestions on characters to add and stuff. I'll be making a couple statements as well. 1. The next arc will introduce multiple love interests for Raine. I'm not shallow, so I'm actually going to do my best to flesh out each character and give them solid reasons for liking best boy. 2. Although you may have grown to like the characters from the prologue arc, the next one will take place in a different area, so there'll be far less of them. Of course there is a happy ending for Everett and Liara (for now) so there's that. 3. I don't know if the fight scenes I make are good or not, or whether or not they're long or short, but there will be more in the next arc. The next arc will be long asf, so look forward to it. Thank you for all of those that decided to stick with the novel up until this point. I don't plan on contracting with Webnovel, so I'm hoping to keep this a free novel. Oh, and over time, I might post a few oneshot stories on my profile idk. Thank you for listening, or reading

The first arc is in its final stretch. The last few chapters will be released at the same time, so I hope you enjoy them.

Bro just casually analyzed exactly where I was going and why I chose said abilities, I hope to someday reach your level of analysis. I fixed the chapters btw.

Thx mate, I appreciate the review.

3 left alive

Limes >

Universe Magic is incredibly rare to inherit and impossible to learn. And Raine was born with two abilities.

Author here, For starters thank you for the support. This whole thing started as a joke after I read the Novel's Extra. Anyway, I will be confirming a few things about the progression of this novel. 1. I wanted to be different, so the first few arcs will be as a child and we'll watch Raine grow. Kinda like Rudeus but not as good. 2. Of course Raine will become OP. What kinda generic novel author would I be without giving stupidly strong abilities to my protagonist. 3. While Raine is currently helping others with their relationships, that's not gonna stop him from having a larger harem than Aaron. Thx for listening to my little rant. Pls continue the support. Also, go support that Stealing the Protagonist's Yandere Lovers novel, seems pretty legit.