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No I think the MC he's quite realistic that all. He may be a genius at the end he's only a human he can't change the whole world and society he's just try to help and the new familly that he found and live it up. And I think what he did until now is quite logical and really good. In my opinion what you did until now with this story is really good.Your caracters are really good . That why I really hope that you will keep writting thus story :)