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EliteBinger22222yrReplied to Lunatic_17probably intended as a reference
After three hard fought years, Vanguard ended the Age of Villains in 2040 by striking down Zahak, the mightiest villain of all whose power to freely take, manipulate, and alter powers made him worth a thousand Alterhumans by himself.- EliteBinger22222yrReplied to BrazillianFox
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Not missing the chance, Mistress Candace winked at Felix from the void realm as she peeked at his crotch. - EliteBinger22222yrPosted
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I dont think that was a good suggestion honestly having like: “Chapter One: Assassain” is much more professional than “1 Assassin!”
Assassin! - EliteBinger22222yrReplied to Imperator_Romanium
i guess yeah but it doesn't focus on the op and theres only like bc its mainly a parody and its rly funny
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Im personally into university XY. I heard they have a very developed s*x education program.
Luckily, University A, the only university near me, offered a scholarship program that perfectly suited my needs. - EliteBinger22222yrReplied to MarzipanWeasel
Truthful ness
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This makes it sound like the concubines are his. Maybe you should say “his father’s concubines”?
Prince Balin greeted politely as he looked at his brothers, sisters, concubines, governors, generals, and all the important figures of the Mariana Empire. - EliteBinger22222yrCommented
It seems the author forgot to transition back to double quotations from the thought
'Brother should we go in now?' Princess Alma complained, 'I don't want to make her feel good by being the last to arrive.' - EliteBinger22222yrCommented
“Over the universe has been” -> “Across the universe have been” “Or was it just us” -> “or if it was just us”
"We need to check if all exploration crews over the universe has been affected by this terrorist organization or was it just us." Maganda Chief proposed calmly after being picked. - EliteBinger22222yrReplied to EliteBinger2222
“Were” -> “was
That's what the association of explorers were afraid to off. - EliteBinger22222yrCommented
“To off” -> “of”
That's what the association of explorers were afraid to off. - EliteBinger22222yrCommented
“ ‘The’ second councilwoman asked”
"Who wants to honor us with his voice this evening?" 2nd councilwoman asked faintly as she titled her head at her peers. - EliteBinger22222yrCommented
I think you meant ”they would be screwed” or smth, because, if they had alrea missed the meeting, how would they be ‘there’ to protest against it
If they missed it and a decision was made that would mess up with their territory or businesses, they needed to be there to protest against it. - EliteBinger22222yrReplied to Klip
Dude, hes neutral and that would be a pain and im sure if they all teemed up hed get his ass handed to him
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Milky way galaxy getting destroyed by felix sounds like great foreshadowing tbh(hopefully)
"What a shame, you looked fancy." Asna sighed disappointedly as she watched the Milky Way Galaxy getting destroyed by his barbaric hands. - EliteBinger22222yrCommented
“single” should be capitalized like u did the rest
Marital status: Single - EliteBinger22222yrCommented
Yes a man’s romance indeed
It was a dream of every man or boy to pilot a mech and f*ck some shit up. - EliteBinger22222yrCommented
“Always used to fill it back in”?
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Kaguya is better
On the other hand, Felix's reputation had reached a new low due to him being seen holding hands with Asna from time to time.