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Fallen102yrCommentedCorvin sounds good, can he be less of a maniac? Let him grow slowly without planning to kill his father age 4..... Economic growth and development without too much OP. Maybe also less magick? In ASOIAF its quit evil (With sacrificec and bloof) even old gods kind.
I've decided to rewrite this story, and not completely abandon it. Also, I'm not 100% sure about the name of the MC, should I keep it as Corvin or change it? If you think I should change it then give suggestions below.- Fallen102yrCommented
After reading other comments I now know why most of the fanfinc on this website are thrash about overpowered mc without reason.....
Even Madara and hashirama reach their level after decades of improvement. Even if he's reincarnated there's no way he'll become that strong in a short time, he's just gonna improve really fast but not instant. I try to make this believable alright. Maybe he'll become that strong when he's at Dragon's age, but not while he follow Luffy to be a pirate king. I'll make him strong but not stronger than his captain and maybe about Zoro's strength. But i'll try to make it entertaining and i'll change some part of canon, pls wait fot it. - Fallen102yrCommented
Gotta catch them all.
"I would like the youngest son of the Uchiha patriarch." - Fallen102yrCommented
Popadanets is Russian for "Self Insert".
As a popadanets who inherited the bloodline of the White Fang Konoha, Yerushai is certainly not inferior to Kakashi, but he considers early graduation from the Academy a stupid act.