john_loyd

just name it longinus is much cooler than the spear of god. You really need to have better names to this fanfic

there are many names of it, but the well-known ones are Akashic Records and the Root

........................................... GARBAGE 🗑 the first two were promising, then when the 3 chap you literally make stupid when he has the GODDAM OMNITRIX HE CAN LITERALLY TURN TO FREAKING BRAINSTORM TO MAKE A COMPANY AND CREATE PATENTS OF TECHNOLOGY HE CAN EVEN CREATE GOD COMPUTER YOU STUPID AUTHOR GOD YOUR WRITING SUCK ITS BETTER YOU REMAKE THIS AND GET THE HELP OF CHAT GPT MAYBE MAYBE YOUR STORY WILL GET BETTER

you stupid, you really have no reading comprehension

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