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Yea thanks to let us know that he is much larger now. When we first saw him use his form he had a wingspan of 10m and since then you never mentioned his actual height and length. Could be 15m, 20,30 or even 200 meters. AUTHOR WE DONT KNOW
And you can’t write: „It spread as fast as light as it instantly covers the entire reality“ - The speed of light is extremely, and i mean EXTREMELY slow compared to the size of a Univers and even more so for a Cosmos or a Reality. If we put that in a different scale, even a snail on salt would move faster than the speed of light in something as vast as a Reality. You could watch some videos on yt about Speed Of light Compared to distances etc. They are pretty cool.
Hola señor Author, I just wanted to tell you that you gotta inform yourself about the speed of light or speed and time in general. First of you write that Noah traverses a Cosmos instantly with a single step… That alone would be more that 1,000,000,000 Lightyears per ?. Well and in fight scenes you mention milliseconds and microseconds and so on… Based on the speed that those beings should have, the term „time“ doesn’t even exist anymore… But since that would be hard to write you could just use terms like: Picosecond. 10⁻¹² second. Femtosecond. 10⁻¹⁵ second. Attosecond. 10⁻¹⁸ second. This is a billionth of a billionth of a second. Zeptosecond. 10⁻²¹ second. Yoctosecond. 10⁻²⁴ second. This is a millionth of a billionth of a billionth of a second.
Hola señor Author, I just wanted to tell you that you have absolute no knowledge of time and speed in particular… In some chapters you write that Noah instantly traverses a Cosmos with a single step and while fighting somebody you say that milliseconds or microseconds pass… But do you know how fast somebody has to be to move across a Cosmos with multiple Universes in it in an instant? The speed would be 1,000,000,000x (could be much faster or slower, just so that you get the reference) the speed of light. Based on that speed the term „time“ actually doesn’t exists. But since that would be hard to write you could just use: Nanosecond. 10^9 second. Picosecond. 10⁻¹² second. Femtosecond. 10⁻¹⁵ second. Attosecond. 10⁻¹⁸ second. This is a billionth of a billionth of a second. Zeptosecond. 10⁻²¹ second. Yoctosecond. 10⁻²⁴ second. This is a millionth of a billionth of a billionth of a second. That aside you Novel is great! 👌
Wow really wouldn’t have thought to randomly find such a hidden gem. Its sad that there are only 25 Chaps so far but I hope that the author will keep updating this fic. Props to the author, the grammar is quite good so far and the overall design of the story and all is a solid 8/10 if not 9/10. keep up the good work Author ✍️