Leomorra_

The story is good where mc is focused on getting stronger and living his own life rather than ostracising tang san. The story has huge potential if the author keeps posting consistently.

Overall the story is progressing smoothly as the author shows the story from a different perspective. Hope the author continues posting consistently.

I haven't played genshin impact but I quite enjoyed the story and didn't find it confusing. Hope the author continues to update Peace

The story is a little underwealming and the oc characters feel a bit bland but the story has huge potential for improvement regarding character development of mc and Fortuna with regards to the original canon story.

This is quite a nice story as mc even when getting a system doesn't just stops training and sucking benefits with system but actively tries to improve himself and doesn't act arrogant and smug about it. The author is also doing great posting consistently. Hope this story will continue to the end

It is a okay kind of fanfic, not bad but not too good either. Though the author kept the story pretty balanced and mc has to work to be Op. U can read it if u ran out of good fanfics.

The concept of story is good but is not as well executed. There are many plotholes like the over the top money mc has. But overall the story is quite enjoyable if u remove the excessive system rewards. Hope u continue the story and improve!

The story is well paced but sometimes gets a bit repetitive. However despite some repetitiveness, the story is is quite enjoyable and shows promise in the upcoming chapter. Hope the auther keeps the consistency

The story is bit on the carefree and light style . Overall characters are quite enjoyable and funny .

This is one of the best Hp fanfic I have read that has good charactor development and pacing.