kzidane_wp
lazy guy
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what kind of battle did i see? is this can be considered a novel? it more like a logbook at this point
classic, trying to be lay low, and someone destroy the plan.
seeing this <nulli> make me lost the reading expirience [img=Speechless]
what a messy chapter
hmmm.... i found this novel kinda similiar to i will kill the author.... or is just me?
why i feel it like i have seen this scene? is there any novel that have with this similiar scene? if i not mistaken.
there are many wrong grammar.....
did you use a translate corection? i find quite many wrong word, like using she to refer cale who is male.
there are repeated paragraph......
1 chapter just for opening the status.....great
long chapter but nothing but mc being paranoid[img=disgusted]
using the word "right" so many time make kinda irritated
the grammar, it make me confuse....[img=nervous]