I personally think that the first part is the best for which you can make fan fiction, especially when there is Bibi Dong :)

I read a comment somewhere that the main character is not a fool, but he took and burned such technology on nonsense.. In my country, he would have been killed there

I personally think it would be nice to bring the main character together with Hella, the goddess of death.

I express the hope that the author will quickly restore all the chapters

author, I would like to know if there is a continuation of your work?

the chapter is purely empty, it doesn't even advance the plot, it's just a monologue from Dumbledore, a boring and pointless chapter

I have a question: will the main character lick Tang San's dog or will he go his own way?

I laughed from the moment where they say stop thinking

The author mixed up the names of Sasuke and Itachi in this chapter

Is everything all right with the author's head?? What kind of romantic relationship can there be at the age of seven, children do not even know such a thing "apart from gg who is an adult in the carcass of a child, but behaves even more childishly" everything can change so much that they can become sworn enemies, although, knowing the authors of such works, she will jump into his harem and also lead with a friend

I don't quite understand your admiration between them, as it is awkward for an adult man to talk to a seven-year-old child, although he justifies it, but still unnatural behavior that he shows is unnerving. This is my personal opinion and I do not force anyone to follow it

I don't know why, but the main character annoys me

The original work is not about anything at all, there is not even 18+ so I like your improvisation of the work The original work is not about anything at all, there is not even 18+ so I like your improvisation of the work

Personally, I liked the work of art. I also have a suggestion for the gods that they can have children from humans, but without divine power, but with powers such as increased physical strength or speed of reaction or regeneration.

Of course, I understand everything, but how does a farmer, even a military man, know how to make ships ??

I personally liked this work very much, although there could be more interactions with Saeko and I hope that the main character will go to new worlds with her, and not alone

I hope that in this story it will not be written for each lesson and their basics, otherwise I’m already exhausted reading the same thing in each work

A good work, considering that it is based on a not very popular anime in the form of fanfiction. In fact, I would like the plot to be based mainly not on useless members of the harem, but on how the missions are carried out.

Could you provide a page for the original?

personally in my opinion, the author should already start the next mission