DaoistY074Ly

hey author, if I am being honest this novel has a good story as a hole and mc's character development was great UNTIL the battlefield. After that dialogue like "raising his hands in mock surrender" , "his smirk, grin" or what not. Now whenever I read ,the mc feels very cringe and it sends shivers on my spine. He is too f*cking arrogant. Now if you want to make improvement in his character make him less cringe or remove his smirk from his face. he has become a typical Chinese mc .Now if you don't want any advice then you can ignore this msg👊

does this novel have a discord group? ??

hey any character images

author don't you have a discord page? ?

make sure his girls doesn't get touch by other men and he ntr other people husband..

does this novel have a discord channel? ??

does this novel have a discord channel??

does this novel have a discord? ? ? ??

does this novel have a discord channel? ?? ??

this novel discord link plz. ... . . .