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First my objective opinions, good writing, coherent characters, original and interesting ideas, engaging plot and personality villain, I really liked this story and I can totally see this happening in the series, I think the characters are even more mature and experienced than in the series, the only negative I can think of in this story would be how the power levels and power ups are not very clear, but that really was never very clear even in the original TV series itself, so thank you for the wonderful story.
I agree, like, if you want to write bonds between father and daughter so much just get Kushina pregnant soon, Naruto could end up a little overshadowed but honestly I'm too lazy to read rewritten chapters and there are scenes that are much better to write in Naruto, won't it be so cute but I think it will probably be less superficial.
I didn't watch the original series, so following the original series doesn't bother me, I started reading your fic because of the title, I read it through the translator so at first glance I thought it would be a story about how a Wizard hates the middle of the week.