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all quirks have to be registered right? how the fk is he gonna explain all this?
a couple of things: 1) midoriya and you didn't graduate middle school 8 months earlier. the graduation happened after the exams. there's no 8 months break in any education system 2) a little more details and dialogue would be good. if you have not planned for Hana or the grandma to play an important role in the fic, why mention them. just put the mc in a foster home or something. 3) he got the fire quirk. where did he train it. how will he buy more quirks as once it is revealed he has more than 1 quirk, he is screwed as everyone will be after him. 4) how is Hana's quirk a secret. it's her body. kinda hard to keep it a secret as it's his sister's quirk.
man this story is hilarious please continue these slice of life stuff. it's too good.
It is weird that it does not seem like James informed Lily of what is likely to happen during the meeting and that the Potter's are also a high level old political family which means they would do something like this. Also, given that Greengrass came prepared to sign the contract is also weird. If he wants to sign the contract, I was expecting a lot more letters / meetings / negotiations to take place before the signing and not such an informal meeting only
I have read only till chapter 3, but I'm hooked. Too much suspense. At first, I thought he would get his quirk via a revenge arc or something, but this is new. Your writing is great, no grammar mistakes. Can't wait for the USJ, also hope he can tell UA / All Might about Shigaraki soon. I'm also hoping that he can help his friends also get quirks or at least good schools / jobs and that they remain a part of his life.
thanks for the chapter. the story is very good. btw he the MC made any plans on how he will get rich. like what does phillipines have in this time period that he can use to easily get richer? maybe buy some real estate which will become valuable, or expand Filipino food via a fast food chain, maybe a hawala system for expats, etc