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  • Pra_kum
    Pra_kum13d
    Commented

    is he gonna be a suspect spy of AFO?

    Ch 7 The U.A. Entrance Exam [2] 
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    MHA: Izuku Reloaded
    Anime & Comics · TenseiNovels
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  • Pra_kum
    Pra_kum1mth
    Commented

    couldn't toru just push the bomb or shout that she has touched it? or throw some dirt / rubble onto the bomb to show it?

    Ch 17 Chapter 17 : Battle Trial 5
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    MHA : Hero Time
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  • Pra_kum
    Pra_kum1mth
    Commented

    awesome story man. so what is his official listed quirk? temporary super strength for a few minutes? with this i think after the USJ attack there should be a plot point where he is suspected of meeting afo

    Ch 6 Chapter 6 : Entrance Exam 3
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    MHA : Hero Time
    Anime & Comics · kamidemond
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  • Pra_kum
    Pra_kum1mth
    Replied to Sabaroth_zarkiel

    all quirks have to be registered right? how the fk is he gonna explain all this?

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    MHA: Izuku Reloaded
    Anime & Comics · TenseiNovels
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  • Pra_kum
    Pra_kum1mth
    Commented

    hilarious

    Ch 7 Ever Judo Thrown The Teacher?
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    MHA: A Talented Hero
    Anime & Comics · Sr_Extremis
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  • Pra_kum
    Pra_kum1mth
    Commented

    a couple of things: 1) midoriya and you didn't graduate middle school 8 months earlier. the graduation happened after the exams. there's no 8 months break in any education system 2) a little more details and dialogue would be good. if you have not planned for Hana or the grandma to play an important role in the fic, why mention them. just put the mc in a foster home or something. 3) he got the fire quirk. where did he train it. how will he buy more quirks as once it is revealed he has more than 1 quirk, he is screwed as everyone will be after him. 4) how is Hana's quirk a secret. it's her body. kinda hard to keep it a secret as it's his sister's quirk.

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Cremation & Exam
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    MHA: My Pyrokinetic Career
    Anime & Comics · Polarization
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  • Pra_kum
    Pra_kum2mth
    Commented

    SOL is good but they have gyms in UA right? why are they going to outside gyms?

    Ch 13 Chapter 13: Gym Session!
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    The Powerful Eye System in MHA
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  • Pra_kum
    Pra_kum3mth
    Commented

    are you the writer of this story in ao3? because the scenes are very similar?

    Ch 12 Echoes of Clashing Realities
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    MHA: Monarch (On Hiatus)
    Anime & Comics · Trooper_writer
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  • Pra_kum
    Pra_kum3mth
    Commented

    1

    3. Kyoka Jiro
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    Limitless: An MHA Fanfic
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  • Pra_kum
    Pra_kum4mth
    Commented

    man this story is hilarious please continue these slice of life stuff. it's too good.

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  • Pra_kum
    Pra_kum5mth
    Commented

    It is weird that it does not seem like James informed Lily of what is likely to happen during the meeting and that the Potter's are also a high level old political family which means they would do something like this. Also, given that Greengrass came prepared to sign the contract is also weird. If he wants to sign the contract, I was expecting a lot more letters / meetings / negotiations to take place before the signing and not such an informal meeting only

    A.N: - The character of Lord Greengrass has been inspired by a more toned-down version of Lucius Malfoy, I hope you guys like it. He still doesn't have an official name yet. So I will listen to your suggestions if you have any. Thank you for reading. -
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    Harry Potter: Another Chance
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  • Pra_kum
    Pra_kum6mth
    Commented

    Will he try to upgrade recovery card and heal all might before Kamino?can he try to capture emitter type quirks in his card and store a copy? like an explosion or some acid or ice or something? will make him very versatile then.

    Ch 20 20. Un-Obstacle-ed
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  • Pra_kum
    Pra_kum6mth
    Commented

    thanks for the update. instead of buying dumbbells, shouldn't he just go to a gym?

    Ch 4 Chapter 4: Training Day (3)
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    MHA: Swordsman System
    Anime & Comics · TyrantIsMe
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  • Pra_kum
    Pra_kum6mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter. i like the way you summarized the usual plot stuff and dialogues we have read a hundred times. the MC finally getting the Nomu is a huge relief. Like if he didn't get it then years of planning went to waste.

    Ch 15 15. The Plan in action
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  • Pra_kum
    Pra_kum7mth
    Posted

    really good story. grammar is very good and plot is also decent. would've liked it if he had tried to find some of the league of villains earlier such as toga, dabi, twice etc.

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  • Pra_kum
    Pra_kum7mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter .please continue writing as the story is really good. although I find that he is very nerfed as he cannot reduce downtime.

    Ch 13 13. Miscalculation
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  • Pra_kum
    Pra_kum7mth
    Posted

    I have read only till chapter 3, but I'm hooked. Too much suspense. At first, I thought he would get his quirk via a revenge arc or something, but this is new. Your writing is great, no grammar mistakes. Can't wait for the USJ, also hope he can tell UA / All Might about Shigaraki soon. I'm also hoping that he can help his friends also get quirks or at least good schools / jobs and that they remain a part of his life.

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    MHA: Unsheathed
    Anime & Comics · RedWarren
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  • Pra_kum
    Pra_kum8mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter. the story is very good. btw he the MC made any plans on how he will get rich. like what does phillipines have in this time period that he can use to easily get richer? maybe buy some real estate which will become valuable, or expand Filipino food via a fast food chain, maybe a hawala system for expats, etc

    Ch 54 RDD 53
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    Reincarnated as a Deadbeat Dad
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  • Pra_kum
    Pra_kum8mth
    Commented

    what the fk is wrong with the MC? why did he leave toga alive?

    Ch 42 Chapter 42 Raid Part 4 (Not on my watch!)
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    A second chance in Boku No Hero Academia
    Anime & Comics · Luixto_Miroku
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  • Pra_kum
    Pra_kum8mth
    Commented

    so canon's not changed in the end? come on man do something different?

    Ch 30 Chapter 30 United States Smash + Jötunheim Smash
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    A second chance in Boku No Hero Academia
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