The opening of the story and the pace of the novel was efficiently maintained. The only thing that I was a bit disappointed about were the punctuation errors. The majority of them were there in the first chapter, if you could edit them out. On a wider basis, the character's traits were realistic and the plot was an interesting one as well. Good job author!

You got me hooked up again with another novel my gawd😩 Honestly the beginning was quite cool and though I am a bit remaining on the end chapters, I can say I am totally into this plot. Your writing approach is def admirable. Imma surely ask a few of my friends to check this novel as well😭🖐

Tysm for the review! xoxo

More chapters will be on the way for sure! Ty for the review<3

Loving itt!! The storyline's impressive, ur writing style is quite unique. U have been expressive and i really like the way this story's developing as well. Great work mate<3^^

tyy for ur review! for sure we will try to update on a regular basis as well as try to make the chapters longer

Really loved the storyline! Ngl this book can reach great heights i am sure. Would love to see more of it. Wishing the author all the best for the future<33

awieee tyssmmm for ur review<33

tysmm for ur review! Will def try to post more regularly🤍

i hope you will get to understand why the title is 'I told the stars about you' in the upcoming chapters.. tysm for ur review xoxo

the gif's cute haha.. and ur tries certainly show their worth<33

Hookedd on this storyline😩🤍 U have done a great job at framing the story-plot as well as in describing the character's emotions. Excitedd for the upcoming parts xoxo

Ur writing's style is gr8,,, the way you were descriptive was impresssive. The storyline seems interesting as well, looking forward to more updates^^ Nice efforts buddy:))

Really liked the way you have been expressive in describing the emotions of a character and also the scene... along with it, the storyline's reallyy cool. Way to go mate🙌

The storyline's quite interesting and the way you have been descriptive in expressing the character's emotions and have described the scene made it better. Good going mate:)<3

tyy<3

Tysm for ur review! Unfortunately this is a twoshot only so we are not adding any more chapters or continuing this. But we are working on a novel at the moment of whose chapters we will start posting ASAP so stay tuned<3