Whaddya mean awkward? It's not awkward at all! Lookin forward to the next chapter, we get to see more action and ice powers! and what the other guys all about, i guess

I knew it was twins! hell yeah!

Yes! New chap in one day!

This chapter is wonderful, wifey! Things are getting more interesting. And don't worry about not feelin' it sometimes, all you gotta do is to imagine the scene as vividly as you can then sit down in front of your writing application, whatever that is. Good job!

a twin? or maybe he always wish someone can exchange life with him?

coooooollll. go Elsa---er, Euphy!

eyyyyy the power's here, let's go!

ohh the evil dust already invaded her and act as the ghost of her family

lol

Ha! I bet the girls have some powerhouses with them. and euphy is a girl and a powerhouse, the guys are missing out.

Even if I'm only 6 chapters in, I can tell there is much potential. The only thing I can critique is there are times when the worldbuilding info is put out of nowhere, rather than letting it be discussed naturally as we go along the plot. Kinda info-dumping, sometimes. But the writing style is really good, and I feel that this is a story with depth in terms of themes. Just from the start, we are already introduced to grief and loss, and social hierarchies through magic. I need more, bae. Keep writing!

Then I'm willing to wait forever. Write more, pls!

Awww, nightmares are no good. It could be a sign that you're not getting enough sleep, or your posture's bad. Take care, wifey, and again, thousand claps for this chapter!

ooohhh so it was all an act big sis

wut, like taking out her ear and giving it to him? or is it just like dolores from encanto?

Gettin' more and more interesting. Wanna know what the deal with the white-haired kid is. Stop playing Genshin and write, wifey! This is really good! (And if you want to play, play with me instead jk jk)

ooofff got called sister, probably gonna trigger PTSD

Is the kid a romantic interest? Or the enemy? Meh, probably love interest.

Wait, this is the kid who's laughin', right? Or am I trippin?

Complete 180 turn, from serious to awesome. Love it