Good story so far, and if your still looking for a iconic sword that would go well with this set up I would recommend the sword of triton from pirates of the Caribbean, it would be cool to see how you incorporated.
Been waiting for a WoW story , so far this is the best one on the site and I gotta say I'm loving the plot line, can't wait to see what you have planned!
An amazing story with lots of potential to come, with the lineup of pokemon and the knowledge this can go very far.also the way the world is talked about you can fill the the care put into development!
Definitely a good read so far, nice to see someone from orange islands . here's hoping Crystal onix will make a appearance other then that the team so far plus mentioned sounds solid.